In a world full of corrupt governing bodies, a group of revolutionary spiders wreaks havoc across the galaxy as an engineer named Johnny must defeat them.
I must say, it is interesting, however, I am a spider hater, so I was kind of scared by the picture. But you're a great writer!
The length might put-off some readers, and I felt like it needed more story stuff afterward, but it's great overall.
Good luck with your next work and your future in writing! I can see a good one for someone like you ^^
5 years ago
2
MokouFriedChicken
Huh. That's pretty neat
Objectively, the story manages to do exactly what it set out to do. The short length might off-put it from some readers, but it's still a good read for those that're interested. Though it felt like there's more to be had after the ending.
Keep on writing 👍
5 years ago
1
RamdevGC
Thank you everyone, I will update this more often now and will continue the endless anthology.... The spiders will soon rise as your reviews flatter me and I hope you'll share it with your friends. PEACE!
5 years ago
0
Leblanc2079
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
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DaoisttIpEU2
Dude, ur from philippines? man u need to come to sweden and write this kind of **** cuz it crazy man, it took me away in volume 1 i hope u write more at volume 2 finish it!
5 years ago
0
Kirim_Filmfest
SIMPLY THE BEST BOOK IN WEBNOVEL short but really2 great story man, I hope u finish the 2nd volume of this novel. Now swap with mine please heheheheheheheheheheheh
5 years ago
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WechangeMind1
WRITE MORE PLEASE!! END IT THE VOLUME 2 END IT!!!! I WANT TO SEE I WANT TO READ!!! the best mind bending plot twists is gonna be hooked! i want to see more,,,
5 years ago
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RickterAndyRick
This might be the best sci-fi novel I've read in webnovel! wow so amazed on ur plot twists i hope the second volume has one or expecting to have one at least.
You're not terrible. not at all sir, I think you may have something here. I will DM you for this idea for a netflix show. This should be a series I do agree.
5 years ago
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DaoisttIpEU2
What a profound imagination you have. When you tell these stories it gives me chills. You should write more of these stories with volumes. I will DM you on discord I have just the idea for ur next one.
I must say, it is interesting, however, I am a spider hater, so I was kind of scared by the picture. But you're a great writer! The length might put-off some readers, and I felt like it needed more story stuff afterward, but it's great overall. Good luck with your next work and your future in writing! I can see a good one for someone like you ^^
Huh. That's pretty neat Objectively, the story manages to do exactly what it set out to do. The short length might off-put it from some readers, but it's still a good read for those that're interested. Though it felt like there's more to be had after the ending. Keep on writing 👍
Thank you everyone, I will update this more often now and will continue the endless anthology.... The spiders will soon rise as your reviews flatter me and I hope you'll share it with your friends. PEACE!
Reveal Spoiler
Dude, ur from philippines? man u need to come to sweden and write this kind of **** cuz it crazy man, it took me away in volume 1 i hope u write more at volume 2 finish it!
SIMPLY THE BEST BOOK IN WEBNOVEL short but really2 great story man, I hope u finish the 2nd volume of this novel. Now swap with mine please heheheheheheheheheheheh
WRITE MORE PLEASE!! END IT THE VOLUME 2 END IT!!!! I WANT TO SEE I WANT TO READ!!! the best mind bending plot twists is gonna be hooked! i want to see more,,,
This might be the best sci-fi novel I've read in webnovel! wow so amazed on ur plot twists i hope the second volume has one or expecting to have one at least.
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You're not terrible. not at all sir, I think you may have something here. I will DM you for this idea for a netflix show. This should be a series I do agree.
What a profound imagination you have. When you tell these stories it gives me chills. You should write more of these stories with volumes. I will DM you on discord I have just the idea for ur next one.