In a world full of corrupt governing bodies, a group of revolutionary spiders wreaks havoc across the galaxy as an engineer named Johnny must defeat them.
I must say, it is interesting, however, I am a spider hater, so I was kind of scared by the picture. But you're a great writer!
The length might put-off some readers, and I felt like it needed more story stuff afterward, but it's great overall.
Good luck with your next work and your future in writing! I can see a good one for someone like you ^^
5 years ago
2
MokouFriedChicken
Huh. That's pretty neat
Objectively, the story manages to do exactly what it set out to do. The short length might off-put it from some readers, but it's still a good read for those that're interested. Though it felt like there's more to be had after the ending.
Keep on writing 👍
5 years ago
1
Mill_01
Hey!
Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
3 years ago
0
alisonamy12
$115,500 Writing Contest, easy to enter. Join now, you can get paid by writing. DM me for more information or visit https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy (shorten URL to the contest page) or contact:emily9213@outlook.com
4 years ago
0
RamdevGC
Thank you everyone, I will update this more often now and will continue the endless anthology.... The spiders will soon rise as your reviews flatter me and I hope you'll share it with your friends. PEACE!
4 years ago
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Leblanc2079
Reveal Spoiler
4 years ago
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DaoisttIpEU2
Dude, ur from philippines? man u need to come to sweden and write this kind of **** cuz it crazy man, it took me away in volume 1 i hope u write more at volume 2 finish it!
4 years ago
0
Kirim_Filmfest
SIMPLY THE BEST BOOK IN WEBNOVEL short but really2 great story man, I hope u finish the 2nd volume of this novel. Now swap with mine please heheheheheheheheheheheh
4 years ago
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WechangeMind1
WRITE MORE PLEASE!! END IT THE VOLUME 2 END IT!!!! I WANT TO SEE I WANT TO READ!!! the best mind bending plot twists is gonna be hooked! i want to see more,,,
4 years ago
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RickterAndyRick
This might be the best sci-fi novel I've read in webnovel! wow so amazed on ur plot twists i hope the second volume has one or expecting to have one at least.
You're not terrible. not at all sir, I think you may have something here. I will DM you for this idea for a netflix show. This should be a series I do agree.
5 years ago
0
DaoisttIpEU2
What a profound imagination you have. When you tell these stories it gives me chills. You should write more of these stories with volumes. I will DM you on discord I have just the idea for ur next one.
I must say, it is interesting, however, I am a spider hater, so I was kind of scared by the picture. But you're a great writer! The length might put-off some readers, and I felt like it needed more story stuff afterward, but it's great overall. Good luck with your next work and your future in writing! I can see a good one for someone like you ^^
Huh. That's pretty neat Objectively, the story manages to do exactly what it set out to do. The short length might off-put it from some readers, but it's still a good read for those that're interested. Though it felt like there's more to be had after the ending. Keep on writing 👍
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
$115,500 Writing Contest, easy to enter. Join now, you can get paid by writing. DM me for more information or visit https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy (shorten URL to the contest page) or contact:emily9213@outlook.com
Thank you everyone, I will update this more often now and will continue the endless anthology.... The spiders will soon rise as your reviews flatter me and I hope you'll share it with your friends. PEACE!
Reveal Spoiler
Dude, ur from philippines? man u need to come to sweden and write this kind of **** cuz it crazy man, it took me away in volume 1 i hope u write more at volume 2 finish it!
SIMPLY THE BEST BOOK IN WEBNOVEL short but really2 great story man, I hope u finish the 2nd volume of this novel. Now swap with mine please heheheheheheheheheheheh
WRITE MORE PLEASE!! END IT THE VOLUME 2 END IT!!!! I WANT TO SEE I WANT TO READ!!! the best mind bending plot twists is gonna be hooked! i want to see more,,,
This might be the best sci-fi novel I've read in webnovel! wow so amazed on ur plot twists i hope the second volume has one or expecting to have one at least.
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You're not terrible. not at all sir, I think you may have something here. I will DM you for this idea for a netflix show. This should be a series I do agree.
What a profound imagination you have. When you tell these stories it gives me chills. You should write more of these stories with volumes. I will DM you on discord I have just the idea for ur next one.