bald_eagle

My first original, Where I basically tried to make a system where you can actually buy Luck attribute. Got the idea from the strongest gene.

Though I will focus on combat suits a little bit, most of the time I will focus on both mechanic and gene-related parts. As for the gaming elements, the whole world is set in a partial game setting. no such thing as Health Points or stuff, but there will be attributes And levels.

I happen to read novels like The Legendary Mechanic, Super Gene, and The Strongest Gene, and I got this idea, to make a new novel.

Only this time on a very massive scale.

I'm learning to write a novel with the same writing way as that of the strongest gene.

Hope you all like it. And please comment. My writing capabilities are really shitty.

Loaded with Luck

Eden had made a combact gene formula and a gene reagent based on same formula.


Meaning he had become a beginner gene producer. But before that he had to set a price for the gene formula and the gene reagent.


Without stopping he again began gene production. By evening he had finished producing all snow winged liger gene reagents.


Finally he opened the package provided by virtual market and took out the miniature teleporter module and inserted it into hand band.


Then he opened his comm and entered the virtual market. This wasn't the first time he entered virtual market. But this was the first time he entered as a seller. After roaming around for a bit and taking input of similar gene reagent he now had some idea of his gene reagents price.


Finally he opened a shop on area with somewhat good traffic. As for the name, he named it Eden's shop.


First he added twenty normal Giant Ape gene reagents, set the price at forty thousand credit per vial.


Then he added second batch of gene reagents set the price at one hundred thousand credit per vial.


Finally he added fifty snow winged liger gene reagents and set the price at two million credit per vial. It was combat gene reagent hence he set the price as high as he could. If it didn't sell he would probably decrease it's price after a month.


After setting the price he left the virtual market.


He didn't wanted to talk with every costumer that entered the shop. The price was set, if they wanted they could buy it, if not he couldn't do anything about it.


Finally he took out his reward, golden box from inventory. Even though it looked small inside system, when he took it out it was as big as a medium sized chest. Eden rubbed his hand and opened it's lid.


- Personalised spot marker.(x15 times. You can buy usage limits using sp.)


Eden was startled the moment he opened the lid.


Atomic Materialiser; meaning Eden could make the suit wherever he goes,  he only needed raw materials and design. Next he received another windfall of SP. It was probably related to his luck.


Luck, Eden needed luck the most. If he was planning on moving forward he needed to spend huge amount of SP. Hence, he needed luck and he needed skills.


Now that he had a materialiser, he needed to buy raw materials. His first suit didn't have any folding system or a nano tech. But if he had to make it in real, it should have at least one of the features or maybe some thing different that can distinguish it from others.


And he hadn't made any real breakthrough in research to advance to beginner mechanic. Now seems like a perfect time to buy new skills.


Opening system store he started to search for any related skill. In the end he settled down on some important choices.


Lv 1. Armour optimization and proficiency. 200sp


Lv 1. Alloy composition optimization and proficiency. 100sp


Lv 1. Internal space optimization and proficiency. 100sp


Lv 1. Nanotechnology optimization and proficiency. 200sp


Lv 1. Folding technology optimization and proficiency.200sp


Lv 1. Atomic materialiser proficiency. 100sp


Lv 2. Atomic materialiser proficiency. 200sp.


Then without further delay Eden bought 40 mental  attributes. Directly increasing mental attributes to fifty.


Then Eden opened his comm and entered designer suite.


Skills...