Rebirth in Tales of Demons and Gods with a System

I do not need to read more, I see what will happen you will do a few prologue chapters until the canon begins and from there you will do all the same only with the MC of secondary character and the heroine of this novel who is the woman who could not be sure It is Xiao ning'er BORED you can see from here that it will only be rubbish and I will not read it until I see comments that good people who read more than 20 chapters, until what I see now it will be like this

Reading what you’re writing would be a good way to improve. Nothing is explained or shown, only told. Almost everything is reliant on prior knowledge. Try working on the “don’t tell, show” rule.

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starting from the first chapter where the main character is an 80 year old man looking for his love, this is just an attempt to catch up on drama and this is stupid since this is fanfiction. I think new life new opportunities is a good motto. Not to mention that the main character is too strong from the very beginning and there is no feeling of overcoming obstacles. And because of the power of khaki and others, it becomes impossible to immerse yourself in the atmosphere of TDG. As an author, I may wish to learn from mistakes.

Really? You are give Three wishes and how many do you make? I counted at least 15 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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While I’m a fan of TDG fanfics this isn’t one that i’ll be reading, the MC is basically already a GOD by chapter 2 and insists on playing second fiddle to Nie Li.

Okay, So far im about 15 chapters in. These are short chapters but i don’t hate it. Warning to future readers, author uses “and” a lot so i am guessing english insnt their first language. From what i have read so far I think it is pretty good for what it is.

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Good fan fiction i hope you will continue it and not be like other authors The novel is good from construction to the formulation all I can say is that it's marvelous 😎😎😎😎

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Hey Author first I must say........ You did a f-ing good job on this story its completly different from the others and I hope you write more in the future, I would love that. But since I respect all writers (even if they are sometimes idiots🤣), make your story grow, its good. Don't listen to the others that wanna bring you down and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Sorry abou my grammar, I'm from Germany🤣😭 PS: Pls write more often😘