Who Are You

Hello everyone, this is oemar_danoes ( Author of Who Are You ). Thanks for reviewing and reading my story. Right now I'm announcing my new novel is called Facing Into The Sky. The story is about social-entertainment issues. Many volumes that will be released ( I don't know how much, but it's okay to create some new stories in the same theme. ) The first chapter of Facing Into The Sky will be released in October 2020.

This is a nice romance novel. The author has a good grasp of drama and emotion. If you're the type of person that wants to read a book while crying and smiling at the same time, give this a shot :)

The message of this novel is very sweet and I personally agree with it a lot. I think the mysterious way in which this novel is written is a peculiar feature limited to the **** genre. A lot of **** genre based stuff features a coming of age story or just a confusing period in a person's life, so this is usually reflected in the writing. And this novel actually has a mystery going on so this type of writing fits even better. I've read the whole thing and based on the plot itself I think the story is too rushed. This might be one of the earlier projects by the author, so writing short is good but if the author ever wants to revise this novel into a lengthier one, I believe it has a lot of potential for that. There are several issues with the grammar and the word usage, but I think it can be resolved with practice and gradual learning. I know English isn't the first language for many writers on here (including myself), so all I can say is that there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep working hard.

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LOVED THE BOOK...THE STORY IS FANTASTIC...I HAVE TO SAY THE AUTHOR DID A WONDERFUL JOB...KEEP UP THE GOOD WRK😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

I really love reading this kind of stories that has a sweet, soothing and sort of mysterious tone. I especially love the introvert female lead, she is so sweet. Thanks author!!

I read the entire 10 chapters and what I could say is that it was too rush. Honestly I like how you wrote it and also the plot is great but you're like chasing something that made you wrote at a faster pace. Over all this was a good read and hope you continue writing!

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A very good story plot! I am a picky reader for stories with good depiction & plot and this story is exactly like my taste! I loved it & everyone must give it a try❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up Author nim!

This book really gets my feels...I love the emotions going on that I can relate to. Love the mystery and their characters written uniquely as well. It's a must read! Thank you Author <3

It’s REEEEEAALLLLLYYY good, but my picky, word-obsessed eyes aren’t quite satisfied with somethings, while others, aren’t so bad. In particular, like you can see above, I rated 2/5 for, “writing quality”, mainly because I felt like, words were often misused, or could’ve been replaced by more appropriate choices. An one example of that, was; “the girl was shocked to see the waiter”. I mean, you could definitely understand the respectable, author’s intentions, for sure, but, y’know, I believe the word, “shocked”, is an over-statement; if that makes sense. In my opinion, if I was to use to this sentence, or try and explain this action, I would’ve wrote something like, “the girl twitched with a sudden startle, at the waiters quick, yet silent arrival.” Yeah, no? HM. Otherwise, the story’s great. Keep going author!

Unusually short chapters. But thanks to this, the novel reads easily. The chapters are full of wit. Interesting title page. Hopefully the author can keep the pace of updates. I wish him success in his work.

Nice description of scenes, and a fresh new kind of book, especially the battle inside the teenager's head leaves the reader wonder what will happen later. It's quite relatable. I really do enjoy reading this. Please keep it up!

Great short story, the romance is good, this novel is really refreshing after reading cultivation novel for few days Well done author 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Interesting story... you started off with mysteriousness that could hook up the readers. Nice. I recommend this who wanted to read a unique novel