I love it, it is amazing, the mc is really a family man and is very skilled in his abilities, keep up the good work, I won't miss a chapter of this that's for sure 👍
5 years ago
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William_Cummings
First chapter left me with very strong impressions. I Like what i have seen of the System. The damage and skill level thing seem fair for a rpg. The family aspect is interesting to explore. First person perspective is a bold choice but it looks promising. I so identify with the crushed by an hourly vibe and readiness to accept this opportunity. The family and career aspect seem like it will be interesting to see develop. Gives me strong gamer vibes. Would offer a perfect ten. But only one chapter out so far. And i saw a spelling error. I look forward to reading a lot more from this author hopefully.
I love it, it is amazing, the mc is really a family man and is very skilled in his abilities, keep up the good work, I won't miss a chapter of this that's for sure 👍
First chapter left me with very strong impressions. I Like what i have seen of the System. The damage and skill level thing seem fair for a rpg. The family aspect is interesting to explore. First person perspective is a bold choice but it looks promising. I so identify with the crushed by an hourly vibe and readiness to accept this opportunity. The family and career aspect seem like it will be interesting to see develop. Gives me strong gamer vibes. Would offer a perfect ten. But only one chapter out so far. And i saw a spelling error. I look forward to reading a lot more from this author hopefully.