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This is one of those novels which makes the reviewer give full 5 stars without any hesitations at all. I am simply very happy with the character design the world setting. I am looking forward to further development of the story. This is a must-read. I will keep this review short because revealing anything will be ruining the reader's interest. P.S: Author, I am in love with your writing skills. Thousand applauses to you.

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A highly recommended, extremely professionally written piece of art. The story is about the princess born without his father's desire, amidst a world against him and his mother, this poor soul has to live, prove his worth, and protect whom he loves. I loved the style, the perfect grammar, the wide variety of words and amazing vivid description here. One of my best novels so far, and I'm sure if it keeps going on this pace, will be one of the legends here. Write more, keep updating daily, and I'm sure you will be amazed by how far you will reach. GL :)

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A marvellous work and fantastic story line. Read a few chapters for now which tells you how much lovable story is this. The way author has described the emotions of lovers it touched my heart. That's why made me to add this in my library. The updates are also stable. Keep it up author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I just can't help but notice how great the characters and world development is. Although there were some grammar and punctuation, it can still be understood. Keep up the good work, it's a really promising work and I've added it to my bookmarks! 9.5/10!!!

The feeling when I tried imagining the character made me giddy. However, once I continued reading on, it made me feel bad for thinking that way. The plot and character development are very interesting!

I loved the novel. The narration is simple yet strong. The emotions were beautifully delivered! There are no visible grammer mistakes. Totally beautiful!

Ooooh. I love this. I can feel Diane’s pain! The betrayal, the broken promise. I wonder what Xander would do, I feel like there’s something more with Lilith’s character. I love the way you write, really. Your writing is not complicated and your message and plot is delivered gracefully. Good job![img=update]

Pretty good. Liked the angst in the beginning. Huehue. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if there will be any steamy sections.😉 Little to no grammatical errors.

I have read significant, but the characters appear interesting. A royal who is bound by obligation, a princess used as a tool, a lover who was misguided, it all has a correct ring to it! Insignificant to no grammatical errors, sluggish but well-developed story flow and the alternative of words of the author- these three are the main reason why I am desiring this story!

I really love fantasy. This author took us in a magical and exciting world of fantasy. I have been reading fantasy and seems like this would be one of my favorite. Keep writing!

Your characters dialogue is amazing. I love how you pace your story, i'm amaze. It's like I'm reading an expensive book, bought from a bookstore, yet I don't mind the price because it's so good! Keep updating please!