The Oasis has swept the world by storm: a literal virtual reality haven, people log on and escape to another universe.
Toshiro Yoshiaki, an internationally-ranked Oasis player, has just moved from Japan to Columbus to pursue being a professional player. He is slowly adapting to the ways of this new country, but retains a bittersweet nostalgia for his home. There’s just something missing…
Zhou, a mysterious child who’s camped out in a park, lives in solitude. Why is he alone and what secrets does he hold?
I assume this is a ff of ready player one so this has to be good (You know how it is) ............ .... . . . . .. . . . .. . . . ... .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . .. . . . .
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I really loved the movie Ready player one but I never got the chance to read the book it was based on, but hey at least i get to read this one. This is really well written, you get the sense of the world from the words used and I really love your depiction of the Oasis. Its still early days at 7 chapters but so far they are really good. I'll be looking forward to more, good job author
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At present the book is in the nascent stage as only 7 chapters have been published. The plot is good and well presented and progressing well. As regards the stability of updates, these will naturally follow. The Character design is good and so is the world background.The writing quality is OK. All the best, Author!
Despite how I thought that it would just be a gaming story, I was quite pleasantly surprised at the character’s interactions. I wasn’t truly focusing on grammar, but nothing major stood out to me. Or maybe I was too engrossed in reading. Which are both good things to have ! Definitely would recommend, and I hope that you continue to post more chapters ! Eagerly awaiting (●´ω`●)
It's really fun to read! The story is currently in it's very early stages but the world building and character development have been really good so far. I loved Zhou because of how realistic he is (also cause he's cynical and I love that in a person). And I've dubbed Toshiro as Toshi boy simply because he's too naive and innocent in my opinion. The POV change was executed brilliantly. So smooth, so neat and also so easy to pick up on! The grammar is very good. The chapters are short and don't have any unnecessary details. This kept me interested in reading till the end. I loved the content that I have read till now and have added this to my library!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged). Cheers!
This book deserves its 5 stars. Chapters are short and fun to read. I started reading and finished it in one go. I didn't want to stop! It's added in my library. I'm going to follow your updates. Also, I did not find a single mistake with your grammar. Not a single mistake. Readers, READ THIS BOOK!
Nice. It's a bit like a movie I've seen but the plot is different. Maybe after a few chapters, it may get even better. Best of luck! I'll wait for the other chapters!
The book has a nice plot and the way you present it to us readers is also approvable. But the problem is your grammar and choice of words. Actually, I'm also facing this dilemma at first as an author, but as days go by as a write I continue to grow. I improve a lot and mistakes are lessened. So I hope you continue this work and also improve as a writer. Good luck!
If you liked ready player one, you should like this book.
Great story not your typical video game one. One that has heart.
Good, I would recommend it!