The Whisper In The Ice

An interesting story. Honestly, the synopsis, the whisper and her power reminds me of Elsa lol. I like how descriptive you are, I can really imagine the scenes and their face. I also like how you portray their personalities and how they react on certain things. All in all, 5 stars for me. Keep up the good work author!!!👍👍

Lovely story and amazing cover also. I enjoyed reading the book. It was such a light and fun read, a break from all the heavy, stressful books I've had in the past few days. I'm amazed with how you weaved it simply that's not too boring or dull for the readers. All in all, well done!

The writing quality is amazing and our main girl is such a kick ass character, I really love a strong female lead and she is shaping up to be an amazing one. Her motivations are outlined right from the start and she sets out to achieve them. It really gives us a good feel for her drive as a character and I'm loving it so far. The story has a very clear writing style and I don't think i noticed any grammatical errors or misspelled word which is pretty awesome. I love the vivid descriptions and creative use of words. Keep up the good work author! ^.^

Nice description of character, and a fresh new kind of fantasy, especially the journey about finding her father leaves me wonder what will happen later. I really do enjoy reading this. Please keep it up!

As far as I read the chapters, the more interesting your story is, author. Despite you're being a newbie, I really like your story line. I would like to recommend to everyone, if any of you likes to read in easy-to-read words, this story can be your choice. Everything is explained easily and we can imagine how the characters are interacting as well. Keep it up author! Don't let anything or anyone bring you down with your writing. Everyone is learning as well. xx

Idk about other readers, but I truly enjoy reading this story. There's a sense of humor in it, so much fun. There is no romance yet, maybe I'm too early for it hehe. I like your story author!

What I like most about the novel is that the storytelling has a very clear structure, even though there is the obvious goal to find her father the story has taken some interesting sideways so far, that fit the humorous tone of the story very well and keeps you reading, even if the search doesn't make progress that fast yet.

Heyaaa, I'm a silent reader, I've been reading your story from the start. So far, you have a very interesting story. Especially, I love Roxie's interactions with her enemies Courtney and her bananas. Keep up the good work!

The story is captivating from the first lines of the synopsis, which drew the general view of the novel. the first few chapters are interesting, and the grammatical errors aren't that many or bad that might annoy me in reading and understanding the writing. Don't worry, you are writing very good, and the fact this is your first novel is amazing. Keep the hard work, I will cheer for you :)

Yahoo...It was too interesting and amazing. I liked it. Keep updating new chapters daily. I will recommend this novel to readers. All the best. And keep this spirit.

A well-planned story :D How long have you been plotting the details? More powers and may you finish this one. Hoping you could also drop a review for my new novel—Isekai Institute. Thanks!

"Ohhhh! This book is about superpower stuff!" And that, is the first thought that came in my head when I read the synopsis. Honestly, even though I've only read a few chapters, the plots so interesting and intriguing. The discovery of powers and the main character only being fourteen is like...wow. I like the way you describe as it makes it easier to imagine clearly. To think she has to face more up ahead makes me read it over and over :D

Your humor has won me over. Another addition to my ever growing library. The mystery hasn’t been unraveled yet, but I don’t mind at all. As long as the humor stays within the story, count me in for the ride ! Keep up the good work author ! (°▽°)

This is very interesting fantasy novel. I truly enjoyed it. Hope for regular updates and new new chapters daily🤗🤗... This story is fantastic, it's story development, character design and situation discription everything is nice.... Keep it up 💪

I am impressed with the author note itself haha.. Love is really blind and it makes us do anything.. The female character is very strong.. I think you have to change the style of your synopsis, tons of paragraphs doesn't look appealing for the readers, it's just my suggestion.