Lightning's Attraction
Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.
*Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."
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Surprise mixed with anger surfaced on his pale skin as he stared at the man he's known more than ten years. Betrayal, he thought to himself but he's powerless in the face of a demon heart. An adversity that every cultivators must pass at least once in their lifetime.
Before his consciousness disappeared, he enunciated with words filled with venom. "My only regret in this life is ever meeting someone like you. For this, I shall make myself your biggest regret, never to leave your memory."
*I'll be editing in a few days so some chapters may be changed or extended, thanks for understanding.*
*Picture is from Pinterest*
The cover is beautiful... :) The title is catchy.. :) And the plot.. speechless.. it really seeking attention. I love these kinda stories and I am tbh already waiting for the next chapters. A wonderful plot and the most exciting part will be the forbidden love story. The pace of the story is perfect and the character description and story narrations are wonderful. Waiting for the story to unfold. Good Work.:)
I loved this book! It had adventure, intrigue, romance, and awesome characters. The storyline moved along flawlessly and kept me totally involved. If these characters were to appear again for another adventure, I would be along for the ride.
Lightning's attraction is a book of fiction made by Henry_Hyren. The main audience of the story are cultivator fans and anyone who's in love with the genre. The story is told in a good way of narration that I've personally fallen in love with. What I like about the book is the creativity spent to think of unique Chinese names. (Maybe because I don't read these kind of novels, hehe.) Even now, I couldn't pronounce their names properly, The flaws of the book includes some grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed with proofreading. Word choice is great, but I've noticed some words were used repeatedly such as cower in fear. Character design is is also a flaw as it lacked descriptions of various characters aside from apparel. I was able to picture the scenarios clearly, so this will cover up for the CD. That is all I could criticize about, the rest are great. Overall, it was an interesting read. -Dann Giovanni
Going good so far. I like how interestingly mysterious it is even though it's fantasy. I like the plot and find myself curious about the MC. I hope you publish more. Very well written :)
The story so far is just wonderful. The delivery and writing style really brings out the creativity and imagery of the story. It's not what I would usually read but I will recommend reading it!
A great cultivation book! I highly recommend this one. I'll try to review this book with no spoilers xD. Basically, you get two choi.. oof! Alright, seriously now. The book start off a bit heavy for me since there was too much information. Well, this is expected for a cultivation novel. The overall pacing is alright, you just have to improve on the smoothness of the story. I don't know how to put it but there were parts that sound a bit broken like it doesn't really flow that much. But well, that's just my gut feeling so don't mind it too much. I really enjoyed it! I hope you keep updating since this novel is promising! Keep it up! ^ ^
I don't know whether the 'stick around' part was part of the description or for me, but I am sticking around. the description has a way of capturing me so good job and good luck to you.
Not my usual read, but definitely worth it! Fast paced action, interesting characters and diving into a world and setting that is beautifully set up. A must add to your reading collection. Can't wait for more!
I like the main xin zishen.. I see the plot is well written and author has a hood grasp on the background.. The plot is also very easy to read.. Over all the story is nice and I would like to see how it goes..
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I think author wrote good story development. So overall I think it is pretty good though time skip is little too early for any kind story in early stages at least author handle it little well.
Cons: The story development and character design of the story are very confusing. And I, who don’t read a lot of cultivation novels, am having a hard time understanding what is happening and how it relates and where the characters even go. Maybe others who read cultivation understands, but for readers who don’t- I can say that this will be utterly confusing in the long run. Pro: However, I do like how well written it is. I hardly see any major punctuation or grammar errors at all, which is great. Other than some he/she mixups I think. Overall, the story is decent from the information I’m receiving. Although, I would recommend that you explain more thoroughly about cultivation and the characters who wield such powers to avoid confusion. But don’t feel down author ! You can always improve, and time and effort will never cheat you. Keep up the good work ! (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾
Overall, pretty good quality. The sentences run smoothly and the author has a good grasp on grammar and things. The plot could pick up pace a little more, though. Keep on writing, author! Looking forward to seeing you grow!