Game of thrones: The Sand Dragon

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eh was there really a reason you make him the son of oberyn? is so annoying having a oberyn as a father and call sisters his cousins, second there are thousands with valyrian Looks and purple eyes is funnny hkw you think only the targariens have them! and is not funny reading about a little boy and his sisters-cousins trying yo dress him for 'tea party'! he got to essos then again back to dorne for no reason ...first time j read 13 chapters who literally saying nothing! no wonders you dropped it

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