Ending is the best part. Good writing quality. The characters are okay. It is a little different from what I read these days. I give the plot a 10/10 ♥️ I just wish it was longer.
4 years ago
2
potato07
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4 years ago
2
LinYang
A nice, short read. I was very much not expecting the twist at the end. The plot was great, though I think that the characters could have used a little more developing. Overall quality was good; there weren't much grammatical mistakes. Looking forward to author's next works. :)
4 years ago
1
SilentMild
Thank you for sharing this story. Please continue to do so.
If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).
4 years ago
1
uniqueanime2
This is really good! I don't really like romance stories but this...this is way better😩.
-The dynamic of the main characters is heartwarming.
-the world background is clear.
What’s not to love? Well written and paced, complicated and interesting characters, solid research, and excellent tension. Highly recommend.
Ending is the best part. Good writing quality. The characters are okay. It is a little different from what I read these days. I give the plot a 10/10 ♥️ I just wish it was longer.
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A nice, short read. I was very much not expecting the twist at the end. The plot was great, though I think that the characters could have used a little more developing. Overall quality was good; there weren't much grammatical mistakes. Looking forward to author's next works. :)
Thank you for sharing this story. Please continue to do so. If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).
This is really good! I don't really like romance stories but this...this is way better😩. -The dynamic of the main characters is heartwarming. -the world background is clear. What’s not to love? Well written and paced, complicated and interesting characters, solid research, and excellent tension. Highly recommend.