Jane is on a mission to save her brother's life. She encounters a handsome, young man who offers her a job. What happens when her crazy ex starts to hunt her down? Will Jane be able to make the right decision? It's either her brother's life or hers.
I love the first chapter. The flashback is so real. There are some mistakes that can be easily fixed. I want to see how these characters develop overtime. I hope you keep going. Well done!
I love the first chapter. The flashback is so real. There are some mistakes that can be easily fixed. I want to see how these characters develop overtime. I hope you keep going. Well done!