A Beautiful Nightmare
When someone's past come back it shall always haunt him in a tireless noisy dream...or is it a nightmare we meet?
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After the death of her parents, Aerial runs away to Luna into the heart of darkness where wolves, mythical creatures, and monsters prowl in the shadows of the Sacred mountains. On her run, she meets a power lurking and controlling the deep secrets hidden in the heart of the forest. But what happens when that power was passed among to her?
Luna, the land of stars, has fallen on to great misery, people been hunted by the unknown darkness, the stars dulled from the war. But what happens when the crown passes her faith to Aerial?
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Very well written, intriguing, and clear. This is what I felt when I was reading this story. The only thing which I would like to point out is. The character description as in features can be written even better and also world set up.
Love the story line, it is intressting making you want to read and know more. My fav character is Clair, she has a bubbly personality that makes you smile. The intro really captivate the reader, getting them hooked on right at the start. Making the reader want to know more about the Aerial and the mysterical voice. Eagerly waiting for some more! [img=update]
This is great. I fell in love with the synopsis. The book has a great potential and its hooking because I loved the genre. It's my favourite. Keep posting.
The books are well written, and it has nice grammar. Kudos to the author, and I hope you can post more chapters to the book! [img=update][img=recommend]
Omg! So here's my review! The Prologue was "shockingly" amazing! I love how poetic and beautifully it was written. A round of applause for the writer's writing skills!! ;33 The story is intriguing, but I think author-san you need to improvise on the blurb a bit, it feels crowded and heavy and you should make it lighter! The story looks intriguing. Wonder what Aerial is gonna do once the power is in her hands! Sooo I really love the writing style of this author. It's beautiful. Keep up the good work author! ;) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ (here's some love for you and your hardwork)
I got really hooked! The synopsis was interesting and it drew me in. The writing quality was good. The characters were unique on their own way. I like the MC the best. Keep it up!
Kudos to the author. Great synopsis and character building that keeps you hooked. Definitely something I would love to read. Looking forward to new chapters Added to library 😁❤️
Nice story. Loved the plot. You should describe the world a little bit more. That would be really good for us. And overall it's nice. Your vocabulary is great along with your sentence development.
I like the flow of the story and how the author describes each scene. The sypnosis was captivating. I am looking forward to the pilot's further development.
I like the angst of the mc, plus there's the magical power you'd rarely see in stories such as this, it has given me inspiration too. And I'd always look forward to seeing what challenges the mc would cross in order to grow. Keep up the good job ^^
I like the plot of the story and starting from the title it really is intriguing. Hope you update everyday because this is a very wonderful novel
First, claps for the author for trying her best to have different vocabularies even though sometimes it isn't fit the grammar quite right. Second, the plot was kinda intriguing, so hopefully, that continues. Third, the flow of the storyline is consistent somehow to not be dull. Tips The only thing I can tip is that the grammar. Not the whole grammar. I'm talking about how you would deliver your character conversation. Don't cluster them in the same paragraph, so it'll be not too confusing. You need to be aware that many readers in her use phone, so that was quite a mistake. Final All in all, a good start and keep writing. Hope we have a great day! My thoughts I actually not on FL novel, not because I'm a male, but the novel was still far too on the actual story in my opinion and I hate waiting. So I'll preserve this on my library for a moment and check when it became 20 or 15 chapters.
The premise of this story is an interesting one, and those who are interested in this genre should def look into it!! There are some flaws with the grammar, but it is not so bad that it can't be overlooked. I feel like the story's worlds and characters could be developed more, but as the story has just begun I suppose we'll be seeing that in the future. Overall, good work to the author ^u^
The good thing in this novel is that the author writes magically. Although I am still looking forward to seeking the magic from the characters especially their background story, and the world itself too. I'm gonna put this in my collection, and will look forward to updates! [img=recommend]
Wow!! I really like the wordings they are really attractive... And also I like the main character ... I'm looking forward to read more.. You have done the Great job...Keep going ♥ ♥