Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside
The wisdom of humans paved the way for the posthuman. On the borderline between natural and synthetic, organic and mechanical, a divine being is looming to take on the heritage of its creators. Humans are not the end of the line and their evolutionary heirs have come.
The shining age of Cyborgs is rising in the darkest era of mankind.
Without memories of his previous life, DWN-49, called Dawn, awakens inside a technologically modified artificial body in the lawless Megapolis Haven, the last refuge in a war-ravaged world.
From now on he is destined to be a superhuman killing machine and a member of the Archetype Commando, an elitist mercenary group.
After the arising of inexplicable recollections from the past, doubts haunt Dawn. Is he really just a superior tool, a means to an end? Or is he still human after all, in control of his own fate?
Follow him on his journey to upgrade himself, find powerful artifacts and unravel Haven's countless mysteries...
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Great story all very detailed in mini details is one of the most beautiful stories I have read on the science fiction genre and reflects everything. And I'd like to suggest putting some romance into the novel. Thanks a lot for this great story anyway !!!!
the first chapter opening with a war scene.. it's a nice start actually.. I have read all the chapters highly recommended Good luck author,
I thought at first it will be a little bit difficult for me to read since it's sci-fi but it's proven wrong when I start to read the prologue and first chapter. It feels like I'm watching a movie. I'm already in love with it! Oh, and I wish the author(s) good luck on the Spirity Awards, tons of luck for this book!
Your synopsis grips me first, then the prologue which really explains everything to come in the book. Though sci-fi is not my cup of tea but when I see a good story I won't hesitate to dive in. Well done on your plot development, the well-detailed description of your characters and scenes, it really progresses the plots. Also, your grammar is good and the plot moves at a steady pace.
I really love how exciting this is. The prologue really had me hooked and I'm so hyped to know what happens next. I don't think I've ever read a webnovel with a cyborg mc, its so unexpected. I'm glad this isn't clichéd like he reincarnated as a game character or something. The detailing of all the weapons and sensory alerts make this a really awesome read. I wonder if our mc is going to gain emotions later. I'm really curious to see where this goes. Keep posting chapters Author, I'll be staying tuned.
I love how dramatic the prologue is! It makes you shoot questions like 'what's happening? and such. I like it because it's unique and u really did an excellent way to describe, so I totally dig ur writing. The main character really makes me curious about him. I've always liked sci-fi so consider me hooked to this! :D
So you can only read the prologue. And I think it's one of those prologues that aren't boring. You did a great job at that. It ended with a cliffhanger which will most likely attract reader. I wish you well on the competition.
So far only the prologue is available to read. And I'd say it's a pretty good prologue. The lab and the general atmosphere of the scene is described in a easy to understand manner. I really like how the author has explained some of the sci-fi elements right away, I think this will really help the reader understand the actual story that has yet to begun. So far we only have a bit of background and we've been introduced to a few characters. The prologue leaves the reader with questions like "Who is attacking?" "What happened to the lady?" and all other little things like that, which will definitely motivate a reader to read more. This novel currently only has the prologue so I can't say much about the plot but the setting is interesting so far.
The setting is interesting and what's happened so far has just been building up more and more suspense for what looks to be an interesting story.
Im confused is this a translation? But lets just say its not, I think I cant stipulate much with the prologue alone. You're writing is good on WN standards, your opening will leave a cliff hanger to the audience. What else to say, the synopsis has potential, where in the next chapter the guy wakes up and stuff and begins his journey.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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