This the story of a bioengineer that created a virus that reduced Earth's population by over half and was sentenced to death. His journey did not end with death a deity decided to punish him further by him having reincarnated into the one anime he hated most, Highschool DxD. His punishment didn't end there he was also reincarnated into a girl along with a system that prevented him from drastically altering the original story like killing Issei. Now watch as he now she struggles in this chaotic world for the amusement of a deity. ( I do not own high school dxd or any references used in this fanfic.)
I don't know why you decided to rewrite this story tbh. It was fine where it was, like loads of people loved it myself included. This new rewrite to me seems so much worse than the original. The first was just way more interesting, was really detailed and had a solid foundation. This seems the exact opposite, less detailed, seems rushed and wth is with this broken af lottery? It completely breaks the story. (If you're not looking for godly mc by like chap 10) Overall the previous story to me is 1000% better... has gone downhill for me. You also seem to be taking much more time to write than you did with the previous story.
Muito bom recomendo A pesar da história ser meio parada ela e desenvolve muito os personagem O ruim e que ele demora demais para pública mais capítulos