Harry Potter: Lost Son

So this story till now it’s amazing, i hope that author never drops it, the mc is badass, he has a dark Phoenix as a familiar, there isn’t much i can say about the story without spoilers , so he’s obviously going for a good root, he doesn’t care about canon, and isn’t afraid to change it, Just read it till at least chapter 10 to give your opinion

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This is a decent fanfic; it has an interesting MC and the flow isn't bad. However, I find it a little bit boring, as it is too cliched for my taste. There's Dumbledore and Ron bashing, of course, and the main character is quite predictable. On another note, I feel the story focuses too much in pureblood culture - which can be interesting, but isn't, actually, as every concept presented isn't new at all. Moreover, in my opinion, the story is too slow-paced. But I guess that isn't a bad point per se. Overall, this fanfic is decent, but it isn't too engaging, as it is clear that Dumbledore attempts in manipulating the MC won't be successful.

really great story. don't make the same mistake as me. the story is on another site but it is the same author😅 if you do just give the man/lady some pstones

I found myself reading this out of pure curiosity. As I read through the chapters I've realized that the standards that I had for the current story fanfic that I am reading what above myexpectations. I laughed so much. Please Don't Drop!

The story is lacking character depth. There is no emotional context to the dialogue, which is otherwise well written. The MC decides a minimal interference approach so as not to change canon too much, but it doesn't hint at what he plans to use the knowledge for... so we end up reading about unmade decisions and untaken actions rather than actual story content.

Good Story. I read it on FF.net and am happy that you are continuing it. Keep up the good work. .

This is an amazing story so far. I have Been on hundreds of storys and non so far have made me want yo see the story conyinued like tgis one. the goose bumps i was given were amazing please Continue the freat work

hope peter is captured and he pushes for demontors kiss for him. Also he should demand compensation from the previous administration like barty crouch(head of the dmle at that time), bagnold(minister of magic at that time) and dumbledore(chief warlock). he could demand all of their money. Also after that he should befriend harry and train him.

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great fiction for fanfiction and I like the way the author is taking direction of his characters and made them more realistic alive. I like paper cut-outs they are always being willing to be more engaging reader

This is a righteously ball-bustingly brilliant take on the Harry Potter verse!! There’s sciences in here that I think every hp fan would have loved to have seen happen and some really clever turns as the story has progressed. The author has wonderfully portrayed the beginnings of an alternate path from canon which has flowed consistently so far. Love this book and want to see it continue!!!

This is amazing so far. The main character is not presented in the typical fan fiction way and is not overly powerful. Over all the development and progress of the story shows that the author knows what they are talking about and does not make it seem rushed.