As it is now (previous chapter updated)

The next day – Ironstone, 10 AM

*FLIP* *FLIP*

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You never know who you're going to bump into a bar in Ouigab. Our city, being the center of Teungeb's culture in music births not only artists but odd situations.

The award-winning director and singer Isaac Yawat, along with his old friends, the rising stars of Ouigab's indie music scene, the Percussive Corrections, were seen performing together at a bar in East Ouigab last night, entertaining the bar's patrons. The director of 'Hope and Innocence', Jouny Yalen and Isaac's regular film collaborator, was also among those in attendance. 

Isaac and friends performed for four straight hours in the bar…

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*FLIP* *FLIP* 

"Good morning Tayaw…" Tayaw is interrupted from reading the morning issue of the Nabla Observer, as Jenna walks sluggishly in the dining area.