While I'm not a fan of this type of stories but I enjoyed this one. I like how slow it is, it goes well with the bet they have deal with in a year. It gives a lot of time for many things to happen and I'll admit I'm a little curious about it.
I don't know if the author knows that much about European history or you had to research it but it's a pretty good inclusion in the story.
The writing quality is great and aside from minor mistakes in spelling or grammar I can't say much about it.
Overall it's a great read
4 years ago
9
Vidit_Verma
Awesome Book !!!
The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
4 years ago
8
SeverusMagicus
The story line is great, characters and the events are well written. The details of the story are outstanding. You should have a look to that novel if you like romance genre.
4 years ago
5
Nickaido
Great story, I'm not fan of this genre but I like your Story, it has lot of potential. The only thing I can say I don't like would be how shorter some chapters are. We need a lot of chapters asap.
Good chance and keep up. I've sent few stones as encouragement. More, more chapters..
4 years ago
3
Izmi_Gea
GREAT, I was wondering who Jo Jo will pick up or how the author will continue to develop the story, it makes me curious and can not wait for the next chapter as each chapter continue to draw me in[img=recommend]
4 years ago
3
ssfx3yuchens
ssfx3yuchens here with honest review.
Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot.
In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
4 years ago
3
cherlyswan
I enjoyed reading the story very much. It's a slow burn. Totally worth it. I love how everything started with just a few people getting drunk reminds me of why I should stay away from alcohol😆
4 years ago
3
Amateur_Author
The story seems fun. What i really liked about was there is a part of it which i could relate to. Trying to be perfect all the time. The Author has narrated the story in a way that any one connect to it easily. Nice work Author.👍
4 years ago
3
CoolForniteplayer
The concept is unique and one of a kind, I must say. The story plot is different compared to all the novels on this platform. I am hoping to see many chapters in the future. Cheers! Happy writing!
4 years ago
3
Tangent34
Hey dear Author! Your story itself with the name is quite enticing. The story seems fun and in the end with the chapters, I felt being quite hooked, The pacing of the story is well and I wish the author all the best for the work!
4 years ago
2
Khawla_Amini
I love everything about this book, the plot, the characters,the idea .. Exactly everything, can't help but wait for the next chapter [img=update]
4 years ago
2
Arba
You know what you want to write, but the issue is grammar and incomplete sentences. I think you publish without editing them? Write and post? That's totally fine, but sometimes reading your story out loud helps with editing. If it doesn't roll off the tongue smoothly, then change it.
Besides that, I think you're good. The idea and the thought are there for the readers to recreate and reimagine. Just keep writing and you'll improve. I was like you when I started since English wasn't my native language. Good luck to you!
4 years ago
2
Chantielu
I like how the plot line of the novel. From the first few paragraphs the reader was able to see the promise of the promise and what is expected in the rest of the novel. Not many writers do that here. So, I'm impressed. Great story.
4 years ago
2
goldenchild725
The characters are adorable. Both Jo and Matthew are really cute, and they do seem to act like a couple already. The story development is really good. It's not too slow, but it's not fast either. The writing quality is good. I do feel there can be improvements though. Some of the sentences feel a little awkward when reading. Overall, I do like the story, despite romances not really being my cup of tea.
4 years ago
2
Sailow_Sanchez
Be honest, don't you get annoyed by the annoying cliche reviews.
'great story'
'amazing characters'
bwaaaah.
Those suck for me. Any who, [img=update]. I like your story so you get a vote. if I could gift you I could, but I'll keep reading and I'll you can expect a gift from me.
Fan's should let consistent voting do the reviewing[img=recommend]
P.S. I'm in love with your characters.
While I'm not a fan of this type of stories but I enjoyed this one. I like how slow it is, it goes well with the bet they have deal with in a year. It gives a lot of time for many things to happen and I'll admit I'm a little curious about it. I don't know if the author knows that much about European history or you had to research it but it's a pretty good inclusion in the story. The writing quality is great and aside from minor mistakes in spelling or grammar I can't say much about it. Overall it's a great read
Awesome Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story line is great, characters and the events are well written. The details of the story are outstanding. You should have a look to that novel if you like romance genre.
Great story, I'm not fan of this genre but I like your Story, it has lot of potential. The only thing I can say I don't like would be how shorter some chapters are. We need a lot of chapters asap. Good chance and keep up. I've sent few stones as encouragement. More, more chapters..
GREAT, I was wondering who Jo Jo will pick up or how the author will continue to develop the story, it makes me curious and can not wait for the next chapter as each chapter continue to draw me in[img=recommend]
ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I enjoyed reading the story very much. It's a slow burn. Totally worth it. I love how everything started with just a few people getting drunk reminds me of why I should stay away from alcohol😆
The story seems fun. What i really liked about was there is a part of it which i could relate to. Trying to be perfect all the time. The Author has narrated the story in a way that any one connect to it easily. Nice work Author.👍
The concept is unique and one of a kind, I must say. The story plot is different compared to all the novels on this platform. I am hoping to see many chapters in the future. Cheers! Happy writing!
Hey dear Author! Your story itself with the name is quite enticing. The story seems fun and in the end with the chapters, I felt being quite hooked, The pacing of the story is well and I wish the author all the best for the work!
I love everything about this book, the plot, the characters,the idea .. Exactly everything, can't help but wait for the next chapter [img=update]
You know what you want to write, but the issue is grammar and incomplete sentences. I think you publish without editing them? Write and post? That's totally fine, but sometimes reading your story out loud helps with editing. If it doesn't roll off the tongue smoothly, then change it. Besides that, I think you're good. The idea and the thought are there for the readers to recreate and reimagine. Just keep writing and you'll improve. I was like you when I started since English wasn't my native language. Good luck to you!
I like how the plot line of the novel. From the first few paragraphs the reader was able to see the promise of the promise and what is expected in the rest of the novel. Not many writers do that here. So, I'm impressed. Great story.
The characters are adorable. Both Jo and Matthew are really cute, and they do seem to act like a couple already. The story development is really good. It's not too slow, but it's not fast either. The writing quality is good. I do feel there can be improvements though. Some of the sentences feel a little awkward when reading. Overall, I do like the story, despite romances not really being my cup of tea.
Be honest, don't you get annoyed by the annoying cliche reviews. 'great story' 'amazing characters' bwaaaah. Those suck for me. Any who, [img=update]. I like your story so you get a vote. if I could gift you I could, but I'll keep reading and I'll you can expect a gift from me. Fan's should let consistent voting do the reviewing[img=recommend] P.S. I'm in love with your characters.