MHA : THE NEW SPIDER

This book is great. The concept is interesting and the grammatical mistakes are kept to a minimum. Plus the set of powers he has are really cool. I have a suggestion though. How about having the MC register a second quirk named ''Symbiote" to avoid awkward questions like ' what is that big gooey thing on your body?'.

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Story was okay but almsot every chapter was just explaining his abilities but also forgetting about his spidey sense... but what made me drop a star an a half is just the fact that the author gives Deku a pyrokinesis quirk before him getting OFA kinda ruined the story so yeah. Rating may change but idk

This is great keep doing this work and please don't abondon it I will support you[img=recommend]

Another self fulfillment bs, mc has spiderman, symbiote and haku, masters spiderman and learn to use haki and the symbiote quite young , is a genius, in short? everything the authorbelieves himself not to be.

The story starts off fine but quickly takes a turn down hill. Parts of the writing dont make sense and useless details are added for no reason. Every time there is a timeskip the mc grows for some reason, it has no importance but just happens. Another issue I had was hoe the mc is provlaimed to be smart but only looks at the heros outside of japan at the age of 14. Thats pretty narrowminded for a supposedly smart person. Anyway thats my thoughts on the matter.

I know I are trying to explain the Mc powers but try to focus a little more on the story or interactions like maybe do an interaction with the matron, maybe make him somehow meet one of the people from the main cast But all in all it is very good but has potential to be better

You might be thinking not bad but this is not what you think. Yhe mc is one of those i don’t want attention type of person and the powers are weird

Very good, but I believe that there are now some new villains to give more emotion, something like a partner for the shigaraki that is a challenge for the MC. momo for example would be interesting, as giving a training direction for her to make an armor like Tony's training together with the mechanic of the construction site would be really cool. other than that I think it's perfect, never stop thanks for the story.

can have some changes here and there, has potential to be a great story, is enjoyable, story has a nice pace to it, not too fast not too slow either, though needs some more character interactions, powers that MC have a very good for that would, and it's good that it's an AU world, OC world would have been very boring honestly until it's a slice of life genre

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5 5 5 5 5 5 hope tbis novel stay as long as possible. 5 5 5 5 5 5 hope tbis novel stay as long as possible.

writing and update: good character design: I am confused whether to appreciate new one who only explained in single paragraph or old one. story: training and training then training and more training. Hardly any dialogue between him and classmates. I am sorry, I am more of a story guy than ''getting stronger and stronger" guy.

The MC's personality is spelled out quite well, he is not too fanatical and does not seek to save the whole world, but at the same time he is not a "dark" character, I would say that his personality tends more towards the light side than towards neutrality. The main character is quite smart, but does not possess some kind of extraordinary cunning, he strives for strength but does not forget to get pleasure from life. So far, that's all I can say about MC, as he barely interacted with other people. The writing quality is excellent (as far as I can tell from my poor knowledge of English), the word count in the chapter is also good, the refresh rate is not very stable but pretty good. The author did a great job adding original details that made the MHA world much more detailed and logical. As far as I can tell, the author is pretty good at inscribing of the original characters, but the canon characters are not quite like themselves, at least Nezu, although in the future when the author starts writing more interactions between characters, their characters will be more like their original selves. P.S. While this is all I can say about this fanfiction, when more chapters are released I will try to finalize my review. But I would also like to add on my own that I find this fanfiction fantastic and I would love to read the chapters that follow.