This is the second story in a series, the first story is Blood Oasis. This one picks up years after the events that took place in Nova Abyss. Anarchic Quadrant is the areas surrounding the Blood Oasis, lands of ruling Cyclops. Elves, Dwarves, Numan, Demon, all kinds of beings inhabit this part of the Abyss. The story jumps between all of the areas within the quadrant, some of them are under control of a faction or tribe while a vast amount is still uncontrolled and some even unexplored. Until now...
A lot of onomatopoeias, I like it. I think you have to improve your writing a bit. There are a lot of descriptions, but sometimes I felt like the characters disappears. A lot of Fantasy does this. I suggest to focus more on the Characters to make situations more immersive. ^_^
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