Musician of illusions
Author: fre20000
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A blind boy born into a cultivation world talented in music and illusions. He has a firm heart, a will to grow stronger, and a world to explore. Follow Jiang Mang on his journey to reach the peak and ascend to the immortal world.
This is my first story and my native language isn't English. There will be language errors and if you find them just post a comment.
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One of the good cultivation story, i have read in a while. The flow of the story is quite good. Will definitely recommend it to others.
A 4.4 because i felt like it. Writing: There aren't many grammar mistakes if any at all. But if we are talking about the story writing then i wish things could have been shown more instead of telling. At the moment i don't feel connected to the characters or the place as the writing style makes it hard for me to immerge in it. (This might just be me) Development: It's going at a nice pace so far and it's developing in a nice direction. Not much to say or add. Character design: Some parts feels off or forced. As his first friend in the academy... They met for one day and he would die for his new friend? It sometimes feel characters have no depth to them. World background: Honestly... I wish it was shown or told more of what there is. Like a description of the academy or kingdom. The world background feels rushed over. (Not the continents or larger places but more or less the places he visits. I don't really got any idea of what his surroundings look like most of the time.)
This is the author A perfect rating that perhaps gives the book a boost to help it gain attention. When you read this comment try and read a couple of chapters, the story really starts around chapter ten.
Great story with a good pace. I hope the author will keep posting. The characters are likable and not too ridiculous. Again great story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this book is awesome can u updated faster ..................................................................................................
Yes yes it is very nice to have you and your kids to be able with you to do it and I don’t think I have any money for that and you can get me some stuff to make you want you can get a little bit more and you get the rest of the things I want you to have to do that and I want you to be a good person and you have no
يعني اذاكر الورق الى معايا اقتصاد قياسى فنون منزلية كمبيوتر شخصية فرقة اوبرا القاهرة اليوم العاشرة مساء لقاء عبد جناته تمام ظهر في حياتك العملية السياسية يعنى مش جاى النهاردة سلام بقى علشان مروح تعدى على هشام وعمر مديد على كل حال انا اجازة مش هقدر اجى اليومين دول مجلس التعاون الخليجي في الطريق الصحيح
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This is my honest opinion. Writing quality is four stars, but you should really space your writing. It's hard to keep up and not mess up when reading long ass paragraphs. Update stability is 5 stars. Story development is two stars. Mc dosent even improves his hearing abilities even after training for 7 odd years. You keept mentioning how musicians were so week then BAM sudenly there are strong musicians. And once people find out they completly play it of as luck or suddenly forget. Charachter design is two stars. Not bad but not perfect either. There hasent been much chachter wise besides him being hard working and talented. And finally the world background is 3 stars. It's simple and not hard to understand unlike other novels that add to many elements that authurs themselves forget about.