The MC is a normal guy with a moderately traumatic past (abusive father and bullying victim), and, after getting hit by a truck, gets wishes from an ROB who wants him reborn in Marvel as a form of entertainment. The grammar is decent, but the word choice and spelling is awful. The main character referred to himself as "this husband" in the first chapter, and I couldn't bring myself to read any more than that.
5 years ago
6
DarthVegito
Story does have potential but the only problem is the grammar. Once that is taken care of then this story has a lot of potential to be a great fanfic
The MC is a normal guy with a moderately traumatic past (abusive father and bullying victim), and, after getting hit by a truck, gets wishes from an ROB who wants him reborn in Marvel as a form of entertainment. The grammar is decent, but the word choice and spelling is awful. The main character referred to himself as "this husband" in the first chapter, and I couldn't bring myself to read any more than that.
Story does have potential but the only problem is the grammar. Once that is taken care of then this story has a lot of potential to be a great fanfic