Reality Warping in Marvel (A Crooked Man)

this belongs in the fanfic section, just take this story down and reupload it in fanfic section. I hate seeing fanfics in the original section after all fanfics get easy votes with an already established universe whereas original need work from Author and even then they get fewer votes.

MC has knowledge about what is gonna happen and who is dangerous but is so lazy and dimwitted even if he does have an op power he would not know how to use it right if it slapped him

I gave it 1.6 because the timeline is great but the story Nah, The mc is like a side character who is the strongest. I see no path of the story in this, Like what is his goal? It said anti-hero yet he is more of a hero than that wannabe hero, He saves everyone despite knowing all the troubles why? because of fucking absolutely no reason. He said he doesn't want to abuse his powers this just like a wuxia story full of face slapping, ants are trying to kill him then boom they lose. It is fun for MC POV and Author but not for us readers, Imagine reading 10 chapters of people planning to kill MC and ridiculing the MC then 1 chapter of seeing the victory of MC......

I'd say that this is probably the best Marvel fic on this site as far as original content and the story flows pretty well. the only complaint I have is that this isn't finished book that I can binge read

The MC is retarded, the reviews as well. Made the MC to op so the author nerfed him by giving him a half boiled potato for brain, and a god complex, so don't get exited that you finally get to slap thanos or some shit, the MC would probably get confused and slap himself. Other than that you can read it if you have nothing better to do. Don't really recommend tho. Giving two stars for a creative idea, and taking the rest away because of the headache reading this gave me and the time I wasted

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Is this not A crooked man? A marvel Si fanfiction on spacebattles? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

very good story and idea but very bad MC with a very useless brain. iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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I think the first thing the mc should have done is warp himself a functional brain into existence, because man he has none. The whole fanfic is just blah blah and the mc from the sidelines with no purpose no goal just a tool for already existing characters

Please continue!!!!!

I love that he doesn't just kill and gives creative punishments instead......................................................................

I have enjoyed what you have done with the story especially when you finally gave the MC something to be afraid of and a decent method to kill it. I hope to see you continue this story.

Do not waste your time with this shtshow. Mc is an idiot beta who let everyone just walk all over him. Helping and fixing problems of morons left and right for free. Acting like a 10 years old.