The League of Nightmares (Dropped)
Please check out my New Novel Masquerade of Madness!
It is a great improvement from this.
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On indefinite hiatus, leave a review/comment if u want me to continue this
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Notes-
(I renamed this book from the League of Terror to the League of Nightmares)
(This is an entry fo WPC #144 Horror)
(So please give me your powers tones till 3rd November)
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Official Synopsis
So......this is where I am supposed to give a synopsis it seems.
My name is Luke Patterson, I am 17 years old. My parents work abroad most of the time, I have a younger twin sister, we don't talk much, I had a younger brother who was probably murdered by me in cold blood?
Why? I don't remember the motive and honestly feel hella pissed about that, lets hope my brother remembers why I killed him for that's the first thing I will ask him after resurrecting him from the dead.
Also somewhere along the line I found myself a yandere ghost girlfriend, pretty neat huh.
Yeah, and on our quest to the truth we somehow ended up founding the League of Nightmares.
And the death of my brother might be the least of my concerns in the near future..........
How troublesome...
But you, dearest reader, would find this story the very opposite of troublesome, It is gonna be totally awesome.
So do check out the epic journey of our protagonist as he tries to uncover his past, forms new allies, and keeps a certain yandere ghost in check.
If you ever run into the mc here are some tips to help you survive:
1) The protagonist's ultimate motto is: Do what you want, if someone comes in your way, give them hell!
2) Between the MC and his Girlfriend, no one knows who is the real yandere and who is just plain crazy.
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Alternate Synopsis-
The city of Rowkein is called the City of Horrors at Night.
One of the 7 Great Urban Legends of the city is the existence of a secret list of the top 10 unspeakable horrors of the city who rule over the night.
This is a story of how the entire City gets flipped over its head by the eccentric young man called Luke Patterson and his league of Nightmares as he searched for the truth behind his brother's death.
The city is just the start who knows how far will Luke's pursuit for truth take him.
How many graves will we have to dig? How many hearts will he terrorize with nightmares? How far will his reign of terror reach as he spreads Chaos and Anarchy in his wake?
Read to find out! (Srsly pls give it a chance!)
Gotta review this now to show my initial support in this rare find of mine! You've gotta be kidding me if you're not gonna love this book. Writing & Development- I've been amazed at the quality of this writing. The grammar is so fine and the vocabulary of the author is immense. I might even take inspiration from this. I absolutely enjoy the style - the POV used alongside the humor is a banger and it makes the story very fun to read. The pacing is also good and it makes the plot flow seemingly. Characters - oh well, that ensemble from the support group meeting hooked me to continue. I seriously like the way they were all described. And the girl, damn author you made me laugh out loud at her imagery (and the MC's ridiculous thoughts) hahaha the crack 😂 Hope you update soon! I think I'll wait for a week before I read this again because I want to immerse myself here once more when you've got more released chapters. Keep it going! And if you're reading this, you've gotta give this a go. Rare to find an interesting, horrific novel filled with this much dark humor🤘
Self-review by the author here, just following web novel traditions, nothing special. So if I could make my story better I would, I will just do some promotion here. Guys go and read my novel, its gonna be totally awesome. The MC is a master of sarcasm and deadpan humor. He has an interesting cast of supporting characters, And his girlfriend is going to be a yandere. It's a bloody yandere, what more could you possibly want in life. So without wasting a single second go and check it out. Pls at least finish the first 5 chapters. Leaves some comments, It is a fun thing to do, Also do leave behind some reviews. I promise I wont complain even if they are bad as long as I can learn from it. Ok signing off, your legendary author here The Potato King Keep Photosynthesizing!
I was drawn in from the first paragraph. The direct addressing of the readership caught my attention, which is a definite plus! After that, the story felt a bit disjointed, however. I'm not sure if this is because of the circumstances of the MC, or merely accidental, but I choose to believe the former. Keep up the good work, as it seems like you've got a gem on your hands! A bit more polish, and I have no doubt it's going to shine brilliantly. Good work, Author!
Yay! This is a thriller book and I'm ADDICTED to that genre! The synopsis is written so plainly by the character that it almost makes me wanna laugh at it! I also adore the plot a- and of course the main character who does seem the most interesting. I wonder what's he gonna do next? Keep on writing!
Interesting start, the writing is better than most in terms of grammar and spelling. You're drawn into the main character's story quickly, and side characters come across as just that- auxiliary parts of the story. This comes across as well planned and cohesive. Keep it up, author!
Your writing is exceptional good and well groomed. I like your story and the way your background is set. Good work on the book and i hope it goes far.
I love me some good thriller. The MC is as funny and sarcastic as you have promised. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes and overall its a great book.
Come'on give this book a read guys! With such amazingly described sequences of events, I'm both thrilled and excited. I love all types whether it be horror & thriller romance, fantasy ,action so I'm happy to stumble across a gem! I'm looking forward for more! Best wishes author ~
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The premise is interesting, and shows how the MC takes it upon himself to investigate what happened. I look forward to seeing how you develop your book author 👍
This is really quite well written, though author, be careful of your punctuation. The beginning reminded me of Memento, and was quite haunting. The plot is moving along, and I am interested in seeing where the characters are going. You write very well, author. Keep going!
Even though i just read a couple of chapters i see it as an interesting story, from your unique story telling, to your world and character design was good on my opinion and the rest like updating stability, overall it have made me interested.