Hello to my readers, I'm writing a review as there are no reviews. Of course, that's quite shameless of me to give my stuff 5 stars. However, I recommend you read cause why not.
Back when my novel was about 4-6 months old, I didn't enjoy its setting. However, I reread it and I can say, I need to change and improve my earlier chapters.
Anyways, I recommend reading the 35 chapters I have at the moment, and see if the story has potential. And to some who have gotten hooked, thank you for enjoying my writing.
Leave your own reviews if you wish.
Chapters are updated about once a week.
3 years ago
4
AMonarch
Pretty cool novel. I don't have much to say since the novel speaks for itself. If you're looking for an amazing novel, you're at the right place. There are occasional errors in writing but they're not all that common so it's readable. That was the only slight turnoff I found in this novel. Other than that, everything else is very likable. Hope many more readers come across this gem.
3 years ago
2
Ramirys
So far I really enjoyed this novel. While at first it seems like it was similar to White Online, those similarities quickly disappeared by the 2nd chapter. The novel has a good and interesting plot and concept. Other than the grammatical errors, it is a good read.
3 years ago
2
NoriTheKing
Josh is a great character... He's socially awkward, yet when he speaks he's expressive. I like his interactions with others characters too.
Where's the V.R part though?
It's been 3 chapters yet he only has registered himself.
3 years ago
1
Lizabelle88
Josh is a very interesting character. The Author describes him well in detail and the setting of the story was well established. You will develop compassion for Josh and he is relatable to me in so many ways. I'm curious how the game can change his life and make him more open and maybe unlock the mystery why his memory was wiped out. So far, I like the story, it captivated my interest. The character of Josh draws you in. Good job Author, keep it up!
3 years ago
1
Kera_Wood
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hello to my readers, I'm writing a review as there are no reviews. Of course, that's quite shameless of me to give my stuff 5 stars. However, I recommend you read cause why not. Back when my novel was about 4-6 months old, I didn't enjoy its setting. However, I reread it and I can say, I need to change and improve my earlier chapters. Anyways, I recommend reading the 35 chapters I have at the moment, and see if the story has potential. And to some who have gotten hooked, thank you for enjoying my writing. Leave your own reviews if you wish. Chapters are updated about once a week.
Pretty cool novel. I don't have much to say since the novel speaks for itself. If you're looking for an amazing novel, you're at the right place. There are occasional errors in writing but they're not all that common so it's readable. That was the only slight turnoff I found in this novel. Other than that, everything else is very likable. Hope many more readers come across this gem.
So far I really enjoyed this novel. While at first it seems like it was similar to White Online, those similarities quickly disappeared by the 2nd chapter. The novel has a good and interesting plot and concept. Other than the grammatical errors, it is a good read.
Josh is a great character... He's socially awkward, yet when he speaks he's expressive. I like his interactions with others characters too. Where's the V.R part though? It's been 3 chapters yet he only has registered himself.
Josh is a very interesting character. The Author describes him well in detail and the setting of the story was well established. You will develop compassion for Josh and he is relatable to me in so many ways. I'm curious how the game can change his life and make him more open and maybe unlock the mystery why his memory was wiped out. So far, I like the story, it captivated my interest. The character of Josh draws you in. Good job Author, keep it up!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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