Young Justice: Ultraman
Author: HolyVoid
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“Would you like to know more about Ultra Powers? These are powers that should not exist on this planet."
I do not own any of the characters. These are all owned by DC Comics.
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Keep writing this story please really look foward to what happens next__________________________________________________________________________________________________.
it is an interesting idea but instead of making him a clone of superman why not make him better and by that i mean to be like superman x it could be very interesting
First two chaps need to be rewritten because they are summaries not stories. Show it do not tell it. Chapter 3 was okay but not amazing but i thats because its so short.
Plz continue the story i look foward to the next chapter.---------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------
I hope more chapters are coming soon! I can't give much input because there are only 3 chapters but maybe dive more into Chris and his interactions with other characters? Have him bond with team members to see who he likes and dislikes (in a general sense - not romantically). Change aspects of the story to see how his presence affects the story as a whole, stuff like that. Anyways, I'm looking forward to an update!
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