Dave Dalton, an aspiring physicist, loses his fiancé who he treasured dearly. Plagued by his past and memories of her, he attempts to go back in time to protect her, but his battle is against his irreversible fate. Would nature and the universe accept this reverse or will his situation remain an inevitable mess? DARE TO FIND OUT?
A heart-wrenching story of a man whose love was much greater than the thick layover of obstacles in front of him, and despite that, could he beat the unseen force, Time?
As I read this story, it really touched me. The author has used such beautiful poetic imagery that cannot be described. I must say that the author is putting a lot of effort into this work which can be seen through the thorough research work carried out to give us some phenomenal material to read. This story is excellent, and I can only see it grow further and blossom into a truly marvellous story of the sci-fi genre.
Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!
I had a wonderful time reading this. It's beautiful, complex and genuinely heartwarming. I felt pity for the MC which shows that the character writing was evidently impressive. The concept is captivating and the way the author has written the plot is truly commendable, as I didn't feel confused at any point. Above all, the description of a future era gives the novel the precise tint of sci fi that makes the book enjoyable. I could go on and on, but I don't wanna seem exaggerated so, I just wanna say that this is actually "really good". Overall, wonderful work, Author! Summed up in two words (cuz one isn't enough): TRULY SOUL-STIRRING
Finally! Something different! Not "CEO daddy, CEO mumy, CEO something, etc..." I loved movies like "Equilibrium", "Minority Raport", "Butterfly effect", etc. so I admire the concept of your story. It is a very interesting idea... I hope you will bear with the importance of the difficult topic ;) I wish all the best with that!
A masterpiece! This type of writing is what I aspire to be. Lǎoshī I am in your care. It's a unique gem, shining by its singularity. The range and capacity of language this author's uses is wonderful. If you like science fiction, try this one. The protagonist actions and the whole range of expression is very fascinating. This book is meant to be tasted slowly, and you might be surprise because each taste is very different. But addictive. You never can't get enough.
There is actual science in this. The MC doesn't go back in time just because of "feelings" and "I regret this!". He actually modeled the timelines. But that's not the best part of this story, it's the character interaction. The kids, his sister. Highly recommended.
There was someone who once told me that "things shouldn't be made out of impulse but with much deliberation and researches" That's what comes to my mind as I read this beautiful piece. The efforts and emotions put in each word and lines is overwhelmingly good. I felt different mix emotions reading this. I really 100000000x recommended this story to everyone out there. And I would really look forward to more update. Thank you author for writing this wonderful novel and I hope to see this reach higher levels. This novel deserve a lot of things.
Oh my god what a story ! I just liked all the words in the story and if I want to say specifically it has so many English terms that I don't know😂 lol but that made me curious to know more English terms from your story and the description you gave in this story made me to think about the main characters and for last this is the best book I ever read !
Quite the interesting story right here. Tbh I'm not really a fan to science-fic because there's to many stuff to research. You did well as an author and researched most of the science problems that could result from time travel for that I applaud. Keep going forward with your story, don't give up half-way for the reason that you don't have views because you'll realize as you write day by day the fact that there will be a small following always looking forward to seeing your story going forward. Good luck forward, and don't get discouraged in what you're trying to do. P.S Even myself I type who writes dark stuff can feel the emotions you want to share to the viewer in the MC agony of reliving the moments his soulmate perished. This part got me good, with that limbo of the mind.
The descriptions and metaphors here were so damn good! It was explained so well I loved reading it. The romance element is very intriguing and will keep people hooked! Interesting plot too! Good work Author!
The protagonist needs a break🤧🤧🤧🤧 I feel his pain and I'm not even married yet.🤧🤧🤧 Please just let him be happy for once. Such a poor soul🤧🤧🤧
This is one of the best SI-FI novels I have ever read or maybe the best cause still in progress...The concept, storylines,demonstration and amalgamation between adhering to social etiquettes and to the natural disciplines are incredible. I read the entire contents in just two days in contrast of my tendency as I jst couldn't hold myself infront of such a thrilling Cuentos. One line to the novelist for her superlative, sensational and magnificent piece of work- 'Amada author any short of words can't define the efforts behind the scene so don't be down from critical reviews, u r jst amazing and so your work, this's the beginning fire the murk. we'r eagerly waiting for further thrills...
What an unique and interesting story! The beginning of the story is beautiful. The description of emotions is really good. I think is really worth reading! Keep up your good work!
The story is really good really touched my heart. With beautiful descriptions and imagery, it is almost like a heart touching poem with plot. It isn't like the other novels that I have read so this made me really appreciate this novel. Would love to see more
This is a nice story, indeed. I agree with all the positive reviews here. I fell in love with the author's narrative style from the synopsis. I don't usually read sci-fi, however, I honestly anticipate how this tale will unfold. The MC snatched my heart, because I can deeply connect with him.
I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!
The first thing that stands out is beautiful writing. It's very emotional and quite exquisite read. The writer did a fine job in picturing the main character's emotion, as it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, as personally, I somehow could feel his sorrow and emotion in quite vivid details. Dave Dalton as the main character, is a well-written and quite multi-dimensional character, an interesting character. His love for his late fiancé is what I like most in this story. In short, it's definitely a very good read for those who are into hopeless romance.