She had met a death so many times, but she was still alive. No one dared to kill her, because she was The Master H's property.

Hyacinth

ROMANCE

MAFIA

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Grammer? Average.
Story? Confusing but has a lot of potential on it.
Can't wait for more,
Thanks for your hardworking

I found very few grammatical errors. This is an overall exciting work. As this is the start, I can't say what will happen, but your idea intrigued me. Honestly, though, I am confused at the same time.

But, still this work has a great potential.