Fighter's Journey In Pokemon World

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I overall have mixed feelings. Having read this at Scribblehub the writing might be different on this website. The world background is pokemon and considering we already have a setup and a writing thing called using familiar stuff in order to make the reader more familiar to the story (or something like) to enhance the reader's enjoyment. So 5/5 stars for world background. I've seen worse update schedules but since I'm pretty biased due to reading daily updated novels and not waiting a couple of days. I mean I enjoyed that one enticing fanfic about a certain shameless mob protagonist but this story not that enticing compared to that (then again it did had a very funny protagonist so...). And I've skimmed it not to mention I haven't seen much so 2/5 character development. There are enjoyable moments here and there but most of the time it's just average stuff I read everyday. But those little enjoyable moments with the pokemon does improve it a little. 4/5 writing, Story development well I have mixed feelings and I'm a novice reviewer who skimmed the story on another website so 3/5.

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