What happens when a simple mistake sends you down a path of hatred and betrayal?
This is a story of love that transcends everything.
She fights for a second chance to give him the love he deserves even if it meant the end of her existence.
He is set on the path to bring her back from the depts of darkness and despair even if it costs him his life.
Watch as they overcome challenges together and embark on a much greater adventure together only to encounter some of the most mysterious and earth shaking secrets about their existence.
All the characters in this story are original and it is set in a cultivation world. The story explores many different aspects of their journey to get stronger together in the vast starry sky.
This is an original story of mine. It is set in a cultivation environment but there will be a lot of modern settings at different parts of the story. This will be an adventure and romance story which starts in a cultivation environment. I will continue writing many chapters in the future. If you like the story make sure to leave a review. It helps me better understand my audience and enhance my story.
The story is looking great even if it's just a chapter (at the moment), it's already intriguing. Also, I like the love and hate relationship between the characters. I do hope their romance bloom, like the flowers at the end of spring [img=recommend]
Need more chapters. Hope this a fast paced novel. There is a generic tone in the story but I hope you will add some intriguing characters and themes.
Unlike your last fanfic, I hope you do a regular update on this fic. Is it possible for you to give us an update schedule? It would also attract a lot of readers.
The first read of the 3 released chapters was great. If the quality and consistency of the next updates follows a similar pattern then you have gained a regular customer. I hope your next hiatus wouldn't come anytime soon. I also hope you keep your readers more informed about your updates. Maybe a little more intrigue and editing of the flow of your story? I still want to read the next part of the story.
4 star for now.. ... .... .... . .. .... ... .... .... .... ..... .... ....... .... Okay