The last Daimon of Primus Planan
A man gets his soul captured by ancient gods. He is told he only has one objective in this world and that is to conquer or at the very least... to survive.
Given a new and extremely powerful body will he be able to acquire the support and faith of his followers to fight the usurper gods, or at least that's what they summoned him for. He might have a different idea on how to survive on this new planet after all he never agreed to be anyone's errand boy. Now he must live in a plant where he isn't particularly needed or even wanted...
Follow Obyrith, as he forges his own path seeking survival and comfort while satisfying his twisted sense of curiosity while satisfying his curiosity. But the will of the gods is not so easily dispelled and the powers he is given contain more of the will of his summoners than expects.
Image is not mine I asked permission from the artist Chris Cold from Devian art.
I dont really have a lot of complaints except he sometimes forgets to place a word which might trigger a few but that doesnt take away from the story too much. Im enjoying the story u have created I cant wait to see how u expand this world u have created. With great thanks to u~ DGodRequiem
So far its an interesting story and the author writes well. Especially for it being their first novel, looking forward to many more chapters!
So far so good. I’m not good at reviewing". I would like to see a hawk or something evolved into a loyal assassin if you get me 😈🤮🤠🤮👿👹👻👻🤤🤑🤤😈🤤🤠🤤👺👺🤠👺🤤🤒🤤🤮🤮😧🤮🤕👹👺📔📐📔📐🧷🧮📗✂️📚✂️📔📎📎🖇✂️🖌✔️〰️➿✖️🔝✖️®️
You have decent grammar so that’s why you got a 4. You have good updating stability to that’s a 4. You have a ok story development, I would wish if you did more research on bears and animals that you use also more action besides him talking about breeding his army all day. I love the character design it’s great but you could give more detailed information on how they look. Lastly we don’t know much about the world at all. I hope you get more into the world soon.
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