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You barely explain anything and basically Don't try to explain anything and are just skimping on everything IF you improve this the story Because wondrous Otherwise it will suck so i implore you to get better a writing stories so i can see this Idea grow into something SUCCESSFUL because all you need's a little knowledge and effort