Tales of a Peculiar Pirate

Hi, I'm the author of this story (shameless 5 star review hehe) so if you have any questions or concerns about it please let me know here!! Apologies in advance if I take a while to respond to comments/reviews, but do know I read all of them when I can. I look forward to writing more, and all comments, powerstones, and reviews are greatly appreciated ^u^

You're story has a great plot it's so interesting too you should keep it up!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Interesting plot you got. I love this book🥰 this is just so amazing. I can't wait to know what happens till the end. Good job author, keep up the good work🥰

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To preface my review, I have not finished getting up to date like I promised the author I would. It's been a while, so I figured now that I had the time I'd take the time write this. First off, I want to address the world background. The whole time I read, I was having issues picturing the settings. Were the ships large and intricate works of wooden art? Or are they stainless steel powerhouses? Maybe they're small modern fishing boats? I wouldn't know. There's hardly any real depth to the world around Polly, and I for one find that to be unfortunate. Then, comes character designs. I can't picture Polly as I write this, and most of the characters, save for animals, are just default character models in my mind, glossy white texture and all. The writing quality wasn't the best at first, but it did improve by chapter 11. However, what remained a constant throughout was the passion for the story in each sentence. It makes the story quite the fun read, unlike many others I've reviewed in the past few months. Now, comes the story development. It's. . . a bit rough. Just as the synopsis says, its a wild adventure where no one knows whats going on. It's not entirely a bad thing, but I think there should be a method to your madness, my fellow author. In other words, I think you should develop the reasons why Polly ends up in the situations she does. Perhaps a storm sets her off course, or maybe a team of bandits manages to steal the Birbalinda. Things that are out of her control, basically. It would still feel wild, with the added benefit of grounding the story in a way that makes sense, rather than her just being in places just because. As for your updating stability, its fine, but you'll definitely have to up the ante if you're trying to take this novel shtick seriously. With my constructive criticism complete, I bid thee farewell for now, and shall continue reading this when I can.

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This novel here deserves a 5 star review from me. This plays out like an actual novel I'm reading, the paperback kind. Like I just bought the book at a book store right after I read the premise at the back and thought "hey, this looks pretty interesting." So far on this site I haven't read much pirate themed novels, so this is a huge door for me to see what this author has in store. I can safely say this is a greatly written story. Telling is done good, showing is equally good, to both the characters as well as the world. Keep on writing author, cause you got the foundation and everything. You just gotta continue this because I'm curious to see how this novel ends.

The plot is so unique omg??? A female pirate?? I'm in love, hats off to this creativity. I love your writing style and the way you describe things, keep it up!

The overall plot of the story is interesting. Packed with adventure and determination. I admired the main character Polly. She gave me the Moana vibes and I'll like to read more.

I've read the book and all I can say is, wow! The title book, hypnosis down to the previous chapters, I'm amazed. good job author! keep writing! I'll be waiting for updates!!

This is a real writing. This how a good novel should be. A MUST READ, that's it. There's nothing left to be described of. It's perfecttt Please keep writing! This is so inspiring for me as a fellow writer!

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First off I do not like reading and read the entire thing. Everything had purpose as if it was all a part of a master plan. A friend said it was good but man was it GOOD. I want to explore more of this world as it feels like a great place to escape to. It might not get updated as quicjly as you want but it builds, that tension fills you so when the next chapter comes out it Just surpasses your expectations and is worth the wait. Excuse any spelling errors, phone.

This is the first time I have read or heard about a girl wanted to be a pirate. The story has a new outlook and I like how she is full of confidence and zest. How she isn't afraid of buying her boat and face the hidden dangers. Looking forward to her journey.