:) My current thoughts (Long)

Haha sorry guys, the author again.

After reading some comments, I would like to readdress them as I find them quite logical (I can't find a better word off the top of my head)

To be honest when I saw criticism about some part of the books, I quite agree with them for the most part. The MC is too reliant on Technology and not his Cultivation. That I agree with as we don't see him actually using techniques. I'm really sorry about that. At that point I was just thinking that It would be more boring If I had just allowed our MC to recklessly ruin everything with just his cultivation, I mean what's the fun in that?

So, I'm going to add fights between cultivators whenever I can. An excuse that I just made up when someone said that uhm I am practically underestimating the power of Cultivators and that guns should not be able to hurt them. To that I pretty much agree with but for this novel's Cultivation their powers only come from their qi and not reinforcing their bodies at the same time. That's what people who cultivates the body do. :)

But, I like your comment though. I'm not saying that you are a terrible person for criticizing me, I love it if you would criticize me (not in a weird way). I just find it easier to learn from my mistakes if someone points out the problems for me.

I am not someone that's really into the comics so the events from the MCU are the ones from the Movies.

Really sorry If I sounded like I'm having an argument here, I'm not trying to tbh.

I know that my book is perfect and it would probably never be. The story is basically a mix on your and my thoughts. I originally wrote this story on a whim and just so I could entertain myself as I find more novels to read. So forgive me if the story is not doing well in some aspects. :P

The novel was never planned out entirely, I just made a really rough sketch on what is supposed to happen. I just write stories based on the ideas I get from the top of my head.

I'm not that good with human interaction :P so If it sounds weird please forgive me.

I am going to say this once again. I won't be upset if you criticize me, I would try my best to explain myself and acknowledge my mistakes. If you drop the novel, I'm really sorry if it's not up to standard. Feel free to criticize anything. :)

Thanks-Author

P.S. kind of a spoiler, but I don't think Vision would be a thing. Sorry.

For this next part I will just go over my thoughts for the previous chapters.

Originally I felt like Alex and Annabeth getting together was going to be a thing but changed it as a lot of events ties down to the love between the two. Also, I didn't quite clarify before, Luke is not the traitor, as I had already talked about how his fate was changed by Alex.

The MC would not take part of any of the quests for Percy and would only involve himself if it was a major event.

Alex and his family is extremely afraid of his mother as she is the most brutal out of all of them and Alex is afraid of his wives(Technically not his wives yet) because of his experiences from his mother, we will get into that on a later chapter.

Alex's armor, his body is not entirely resistant to guns and explosions. Which is why I decided that he needed some armor. Plus even if he is technically immune, he could still become injured or what not like how he was exploded onto Calypso's island. In fact even if he is immune he would still be able to perceive pain which is why it had hurt when the girls twisted his skin.

Master Chief's Armor, originally supposed to be a Spartan 4 (or Locke's Armor to be specific) but I decided that Halo 5 hasn't been created yet in that year. What I did realize after a while is that the technology used in the MCU is ahead of it's time period, so screw that. I decided to change back to the original armor before a thought occurred to me. An upgrade. Chief's armor was too bulky and big while Locke's armor is more slim, plus it has a lot more details. So I decided that Evan would give him the armor on a later date saying that it was an upgrade.

The abduction of Artemis. Tbh I didn't know how to exactly make her into Alex's lover, but seeing that his relationships are way too easy, I will make this one a slow one.

One, I don't like to make MC incredibly powerful and would place restrictions on them.

Two, I wanted to make a small harem so I would only add 3 people into the harem.

Three, I might give Susan Storm to Evan unfortunately since I learned that Black Widow was supposedly sterilized.

Fourth, I live in America and my time zone is CST which is unfortunate for most people since I upload at like 1AM.

Finally, Alex won't get close to any of the Avengers during their person storylines like Hulk and Thor. He might help them occasionally but won't appear on most cases.

Jeez, this chapter was extra long

Well I will try to come out with another chapter today after spending some much time on this one :P

-The Author