This is horrendous, the bottom of the barrel when it comes to fanfiction. English ses not to be the authors first language. The pacing is so fast that in the next sentence the mc would be doing something completely different from what he was doing last sentence. Overall I give this 0/10
This is horrendous, the bottom of the barrel when it comes to fanfiction. English ses not to be the authors first language. The pacing is so fast that in the next sentence the mc would be doing something completely different from what he was doing last sentence. Overall I give this 0/10