My honest mistake
***only few chapters have mature content****
Dhruv loved his best friend's sister. Both families were happy with their relationship and arranged their marriage. Suddenly Amrutha denied marrying Dhruv which made everyone shocked. Then the next day, Amrutha announced her marriage with Dhruv's younger brother Karthik which was a big lie.
What might the reason behind her lie?
Why did Karthik help Amrutha to affect the relationship between the two brothers?
What is the mystery behind it?
To know why Amrutha did the honest mistake, read the story...
Look over the roller coaster of love to hate and hate to love between Dhruv and Amrutha...
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" What movie do you want to watch?" He asked.
" Twilight," she said.
" What?" He asked with shock.
" My classmate said it is a very good movie and one has to watch it with their boyfriend. Till now, I have no boyfriend so
I didn't watch it. I always watch cartoons at my home. Please….play that movie. I want to see what the interesting things are in it" she said innocently.
She dragged him onto his bed and leaned on the bedpost. It was very awkward for him to talk with her.
Suddenly she took the remote from his hand and started playing the movie on television. He sat quietly without talking to her. She leaned on his shoulder intertwining her fingers with his. She was watching the movie without blinking her eyes whereas he was cursing himself to bring her to his home.
His body became so hot with her closeness and even his situation became worse when there are the most intimate scenes in the movie.
He gulped his throat and tried to remove his hand from her grip.
" Stay with me. My friend told me to see with my boyfriend" she stopped him pulling towards her.
He lost his balance due to the sudden act and fell on her. That was the last string of his control.
" You are looking so handsome that the main lead" Amrutha complimented him.
" Really…?" He questioned with a smile.
" You look more handsome when you smile. Do you know it?" She said.
" Thank you…" he said with a wide smile.
" What about me? Am I beautiful?" She questioned.
" You are so beautiful, just like a fairy," he said cupping her face.
" Thank you…." She kissed his cheeks.
He looked at their position and tried to stand properly. Before that, she kept her hands around his neck. His eyes roamed towards her face to her neck then down to the low neck of her dress.
He was mesmerized by her beauty. He lost his sanity thereafter and started sucking her lips fervently. She pulled him closer to him experiencing the new feelings in her body as she was not in her right senses. Without breaking their kiss his hands were roaming on her all-body curves. She moaned his name enjoying the pleasure of his touch.
Dhruv got his sense back when he heard her husky voice and stood up from the bed. He felt ashamed of himself for betraying his best friend and crossing his limit with his sister.
He was scared that if Arvind came to know the truth, he might lose his friendship. Instantly he moved away from her.
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To know why Dhruv and Amrutha separate read this story?
Will they fight their fate and become together?
let's see who wins love or fate????
Hi lovely readers, This is your author. This is the story about a love couple, Dhruv and Amrutha who separated when fate play a game with them. To know why she left him though she loved him crazily. What happened that she took a drastic step to make him to hate her? Read this story and enjoy the roller coaster pain and love of this couple. Let see their true love wins! or destiny wins over their love. Join the journey of love couples DHRUV and AMRUTHA ADITHYA and MITHUNA ****Note Please read after my first book " LOVE IS MAGIC" because all characters in that book will be here. Thanks to spare a few minutes to read this review. Hàppy Reading.
The story is so interesting. I am curious to know the reason behind Amrutha's behavior that why she walked away from Dhruv's life being in deeply love with him.
This is one of the good stories I read lately ,with great plot and awesome story.The writer keeps you hooked to the emotions.Very excitedly waiting for the the climax of the story.
you are writing is so good and every chap is interesting with so many twists and turns.. loved your writing and this story is simply superb👌👌❤️❤️
Story was amazing, the flow of the Story was very good. Can be made into a nice romabtic series plot. The author needs to work on grammatical and typo errors.
OVer all story was good with lot of love snd affection. True love can really change everything this was proved by this story. Author your story development is good but toomuch drama.
it was good 🙂 1st part was more better bt it was also not bad ll hope you ll write something connected to this good luck 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
This is the 2nd book I have read from this author.. It's a very good work. The story line is good. This story is about the struggles faced by "Ammu"(FL) who takes little immature decisions in her love life and because of it how she has suffered... Then she realized and how she faced tge problems and tries to solve it.. Apart from it it also potrays the immense love between our lead roles.. I got so attached to this story. Definitely you can give it a story.. [img=recommend]. Good work author.
such a beautiful story, you penned druv and amrutha's feelings and their longing in a lovely way. lovely portrayal of each and every character. I love this story so much not only read it worth recommend for keep writing such beautiful stories more
the story is so good. It is neither going at a slow pace nor a fast pace. It has a fluid growth. It doesn't make one feel bored. Good story line. Nice work author.
This book is awesome, I am waiting for the next chapters and climax to know the status of amrutha. keep up the good work writer. I loved your writing..
The story is so interesting. As far as I read the story, I am very curious to know why Amrutha is running away from Dhruv when she is loves him so much. I really want to know what she is hiding from Dhruv. .. I recommend the readers to read this book who had belief in love...
A soothing calm love story with the struggles that come across the love of the lead characters lives.a kind of different story told by the author. the reader will enjoy the fluffiness in her other book "love is magic" ,a love story of one of the couples of "My honest mistake" It's interesting n not prolonging short story keeping the reader hooked till the end. thank you author @peacock_writer for the work.my good wishes to your future storytelling endeavours.
The story is amazing ☺️ but like to say that Author you have a really good job for me the story is so additive I am just waiting for next chapter as what is going to happen next , taking about the character I like Dhruv character more but Amruta is also good . I like the story and especially Amruta and Dhruv love for each other in their hard times ❤️❤️ Wish you all the best and good health.
I am addicted to the story waiting eagerly to know for the next part of the flow,it is quite refreshing to read the love between the protoganists,going through ups and downs of life before their union,author sure knows how to keep the reader hooked to the story.i have read her other book "love is magic".both the stories are awesome revolving between the couple characters,with emotions of their sweet love,sour misunderstandings and finally sweetest happy union.