Under His Command (Scifi/Romance)

One of the better-written stories I've come across so far. It's a low bar to clear, but the sentence structure, grammar, pacing, imagery, and characterization are excellently done- I hope I get to see more of the world and meet more alien species as the story continues, since this writer does have a flair for some interesting humanoid builds.

The synopsis is neatly done. It caught my attention most of all. The story is good so far but a little slow paced imo. Hard to tell what's really going on in the first two chapters but it's more or less flowing in the right direction. Not gonna mark you down for it. Decent start

Off to a great start with the first two chapters and super detailed! Im excited to meet the guys in the book!! Hopefully their scenes are as detailed

This is a great story so far. The author has built the main characters well and introduced the plot with ease. The synopsis is great, drawing readers into the story. The only fault I have found is with slow updates but as a fellow writer I understand that there are things that can get in the way. This story is one of my favorites at the moment and I'm excited to keep reading.