Reuniting With My Ex-Husband On Christmas
"Honey you know we can't just sit here and not help our daughter get her husband back," Matthew shouted angrily.
"How on earth can we pull something like that off? And you
know Anthony is no longer our daughter's husband. For heavens sake we were both witnesses
when both Alayna and Anthony signed their divorce papers so, why would you want us to save something that is already lost," Rachel hissed as she placed her hands on her hips in frustration.
"We were in their situation once, do you not remember when we got divorced? If you did then you would know that we got lost at some point as well. But luckily for your mom, we got reunited and we even got back married and renewed our vows and the same thing is now happening to our daughter and your here complaining," Matthew raised his voice with a look of disbelief evident on his face.
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I know that bringing my daughter Alayna back with Anthony won't be
easy but giving it a try won't hurt will it?
My wife may not agree with my plans, but with or without her support my mission will not be affected instead it will be effective.
I know that some chapters are meant to be closed but my daughters chapter with Anthony won't be, because I see light at the end of their tunnel and that's something.
In carrying this mission out, I'm going to kidnap Anthony on the first day of December so that he will be able to spend the whole Christmas holiday with the family I created with my lovely wife Rachel.
All of my children take the time off from their work every Christmas and they all make it a point of duty that they all spend the Holiday with the entire family. Just so we can all spend good quality time together, Its a traditional thing but it's mainly done so that we can all catch up on what each of us has been up to the whole time we were absent one from another.
The reason I'm not asking Anthony to spend the Christmas holiday with me and my family is because I don't want to ruin the surprise, but be honest do you see any fun in ruining the surprise?
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Will Matthews plan work in
getting his daughter back with Anthony, and if yes how?
Does Matthew still loves his ex-wife?
Read to find out!!
Note:This book won't be edited until its finish, so please pardon my errors.
I am speechless! I have much to say, but I summarize it to say, this author deserves an award... I have read the synopsis of one of her book and I got hooked and couldn't Free myself. Here, I am again, with this author a kind of painting my real life.. Chai! There is God.. Author, stop stealing and making my heartbeat stand still. I love every fabrics of this authors writing, the structural development, the quality of writing, the background, story development and whatever you could think is excellently excellent. This author is an affection robber, who wants to steal my interest, but I am available to be stolen, I will read your books, recommend it to friends and specially read it out to my wife chapter to chapter, because we've had experiences and we are glad that our love is better, because we are wider and stronger despite all... I recommend this amazing master piece. This author deserve nothing less than 5 stars. Kudos to the author..this was a Christmas gift to me and my family. Previewed: Author Pattyegah Ikwue.
I suddenly bump into this story and it's easy to read, the story is developing very smooth. Keep it up author/writer, hope to read until it's ending.
The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn't sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I'm sure when it's polished, it'll be an amazing novel. 👍Keep up the good work, though
The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!
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The first thing I notice when reading this Novel, is that the first few chapters of the story introduce a lot of characters at once, which was a little overwhelming at the moment, but slowly you start to get who is who from the abundance of dialogue. The characters do need some development with descriptions, but other than that, fun to imagine what they look like! Same goes for the background of the scenario, more describing but has a general idea on where the story is taking place. The grammar in this story and the overall structure needs some work, but the Author does have a compelling hook that draws the reader into a festive atmosphere. It looks like the Author has a reasonable amount of dialogue between the characters. Dialogue is important to a story and this book has it down! I encourage the Author to practice editing the chapters before releasing them to lessen grammatical errors and possibly filling the chapters a bit more with description. Other than that, I wish them luck with future chaps and votes!
The story is definitely interesting, I enjoyed reading it. A few minor no big deal errors but its easily overlooked since the story is really interesting. continue the great work !
I like how Anthony is being tortured by his desires towards Alayna's body..it is kind of refreshing to get into a perspective of a man in-love. It's very interesting book.
Kind of a nice indulging Plot, I would say the writer should change the book cover and use a attractive one. Overall- it's just a suggestion, attention is all we need.[img=update]
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A very interesting and well written story, with well developed characters. This story is a must read and is a good job author. Keep writing and keep up the good work?
The synopsis and the initial chapters show some potential for a good book. It is a nice concept. I believe it wil be quite entertaining. However, work on some grammatical issues. Keep on working on your story.
The author does a nice job of hooking the reader in right from the start. I was cut off guard with the first scene and it made me want to read more. Interesting plot and good description. I look forward to reading more. [img=recommend]
it is an interesting story... the plot is different from a normal story.... the vocab is great ... thr characters too... keep up the good work!
It is my first time reading a book like this, I tell you it's good. Imagene, a father doing everything he can for his daughter ❤️❤️❤️. Keep up the good work.
Webnovel needs more writers like you, you made me cry and it takes a lot out of someone to make me cry. The synopsis is on point it takes a lot out of a father to do what Matthew did and your vocabulary is on key so keep up the good work!!!