Ambience of Ambiguity

Ambience of Ambiguity

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Author: Daoist_Showers
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Vine is concerned when her siblings drop in her state with their own agenda. Despite the general obligation of running away from their mother.



Not long, they are discovered....again but by different set of people. They separate leaving to different countries with these people hot on their heels.



Vine ends up in Poland nevertheless framed in a scandal getting imprisoned. With the help of an inmate, they escape becoming Europe's most wanted.



They go to the one place she had no idea to dread. Her county of half origin.

There she meets the unexpected, expected and unrealistic.



A Mafia empire headed by the one and only Sarita Rathore.

Her goddamn grandmother! Looking for an heiress.





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Beracah_Laurel
Beracah_Laurel

Despite having six chapters, you should update often. Your story has me hooked. Want to know what will happen next. Also my advice to you as a well wisher. When writing two different worlds alert us readers. It helps reduce the confusion.

4 years ago
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the_tea_pan
the_tea_pan

If You can work on your synopsis i think it would help to lessen the confusion some people are having. Also try to seperate your longer ‘block’ paragraphs into smaller ones. Its easier on the eyes. The flow is good and the characters are funny! This story is Has potential dont give up!

4 years ago
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Nomed_Forcraziness
Nomed_Forcraziness

................................................... The story is quite confusing TBH where's the main action? well it has lots of mysteries anyway the story has a good storyline keep it up

4 years ago
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