Synopsis
"Percy, dude, stop taunting the Ares cabin. No we can't challenge Ares. Again. "
"Come on little bro! Stop brooding already and enjoy life while you can!"
"G-man you need to lighten up. So what if there's a giant hellhound running towards us, we can handle it."
"Man stop overthinking things Owlhead."
"Kat, please stop growing poison ivy all over camp."
"Clarisse stop trying to taunt me I won't fight you again. I already broke your spear I won't break another one. "
"Stop zapping me Pinecone face!"
"Luke please, it doesn't have to be this way."
"Calypso, I swear on the River Styx , I will return to Ogia. I will come back to you."
Disclaimer :
The Percy Jackson Series or any Riordanverse isn't mine, it Rick Riordan's
Intresting read! I enjoy SI/OC's but this story has the mc reincarnated with out any cannon knowledge intresting twist for me. Hope you don't give up making this great novel. Good luck and keep going author!
A really interesting story and a good pacing overall. Really interesting powers and not insanely overpowered wishes like most reincarnation stories. Overall a really fun and entertaining story!
yoo I love this story it to me is the best in this webnovel app it intrigued me so much mostly because I loved reading percy jackson so seeing this version of him is also great
gosto da história em geral, mas acho o ritmo da história um pouco apresado mas não muito, gostei do personagem não ter um sistema ou poderes e habilidades irracional mas ainda sim os personagens são poderosos demais se você for escrever qualquer coisa perto dos eventos do canon não vai oferecer desafios nenhum fora que parece que pelo fato deles serem semideuses olhes virão melhores amigos a primeira vista mas pelo menos não como aquelas histórias que só porque ele tinha família antes de renascer, ele trata a família que renasceu na melhor das opções como estranhos na pior trata pior que inimigos é simplesmente retardado. Desculpa desviei do assunto, voltando as falhas da história são poucas mas importantes nem todo mundo vira melhor amigo a primeira vista se doce um ou dois eu entenderia mas todos os simideuses não. ou seja falta desenvolvimento de relacionamento social entre os personagens mas não se preocupe a história é boa tem potencial
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Hello,I form Thailand, and I am a fan of your novels. Your story really liked me. I hope you will come back to write the next chapter soon.
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Pretty good for a fanfiction, but needs a little editing. Writing quality is ok, but can improve a lot more. Anyways, a great read. Keep on going!
Love your story!!!! Keep up the good work!! ........................................................................................................................................
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