actually your grammer is pretty good and your story is also awesome , but I guess this kind of story isn't really for webnovel, I mean , when I was searching for the book, I was searching for a reborn or isekai novel, sooo yk, you should post this on Wattpad or fanfiction I guess, it's a pretty good story though ....
actually your grammer is pretty good and your story is also awesome , but I guess this kind of story isn't really for webnovel, I mean , when I was searching for the book, I was searching for a reborn or isekai novel, sooo yk, you should post this on Wattpad or fanfiction I guess, it's a pretty good story though ....