In a land where magic magic thrives, filled with magical treasures and alluring beauty, yet also filled with dangers lurking in the in the shadows. Here in the vast mystical world of Elonaria, the strong make the rules while the weak have to obey.
Where spiritual artists train to fight, the potential of Ray is unfathomable.
With his bond by his side, he begins a quest to uncover the truth about his powers.
Only to discover a terrible secret.
A secret with the power to destroy the entire world.
Will he master his unnatural powers in time and be the world's savior or will he be the harbinger of its destruction.
The writing quality is just superb, it is descriptive and image-inducing. There are too few chaps to judge but based on the beginning chaps this might be a gem. The world building is also there and the author seems to be experienced in writing. Despite the descriptive writing, the pace isn't slow, it just gives enough action for the story to progress. There's also the fact that the cliche elements were not found in the story. I like the magic system, I hope it can be explained in the future and cultivation would also be expanded.
Except update stability which I don't accept BloodsuckerWebnovel's rating clause everything 5 stars. So full point. Though i had only chance to read 3 chapters before writing this review. There is a very planned plot I can say so story develops nicely. All characters energic, yeah I didn't see any single cold, negative or mysterious yet. Maybe this can be a weakness of this story at future eheheh. It's very addictive that every character in action. Story style gives vibes of Wow+LoTr+Xuanxuan. Warning: Advanced english. Enjoy reading this fantastic adventure.
The journey was long and tough but finally, it's over . This now the beginning of something amazing. I promise you that won't be disappointed .[img=recommend]
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This is great. The descriptive writing hurled me in the story. I hope you update this soon cause I already add it on my library[img=recommend]
Nice story friend. I liked the world and core types. It would be great if you revise minor grammar failures. Updating frequency is good but has a capability of improvement. Waiting for next chapters
One of the more interesting cultivation premises, seems to evoke memories of ISSTH. Grammar and writing are solid, though the writer has just begun so we shall see how many chapters are to come. Good premise, waiting for more!
I love how you Described this World of fantasy and What the charcters were going through and overall the legacy behind it all, i enjoyed it and i cant wait to see what you got next, Keep going
I really enjoy the nice description of the setting and the world, where they were described detailly. The actions of the characters were interesting and expressed vividly.
great start hope! you will keep the rest of the story on the same level. waiting for new chapters to come.--------------------------------------------
Hey! i loooove ur work already. I'm a fellow writer as well, and srsly fantasy is my drug of all times but I dnt write fantasy unfortunately but here it is one of the best ones[img=update][img=exp][img=coins]