Narcissus's Nightmare
Author: Kamatis
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This is just a super short story so I don't think a synopsis is still needed... Just read It... It's a fast read to be honest
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Good book with very nice and expressive narrative. Only five chapter. You can finish it in one go. Nice work author. Hope you write more quickly.
Okay, okay, okay ... first I'm gonna say that this book made me laugh so much lol. I love how the author writes his words. It's truly fun. Actually, I wasn't focused on the diction but focused on the dialogues. Ha ha ha ha Well, there are some grammatical mistakes. The mistakes are often made — but not major. The character development is quite good. The plot is also very easy to understand. Overall... INTERESTING. I enjoyed it, tho! keep it up!
I feel like it must have been fun to write this piece, like just going all out on the most unlikeable person on the planet and then that ending just... boop. I enjoyed it. Quick, funny, and light.
UPSIDES - super short, attainable and understandable, its one of those books that u need to read in ur fun-time and wont be disappoiinnnnteddd! smooth ! DOWNSIDES -its super short!! Which i completely hate ngl! i need u to update more chapters whenever possible, needs a little formatting, ALSO ERNESTO NEEDS A PET NAME THIS SOUNDS LIKE A GANG LEADER OR SOMETHING LIKE 'PABLO ESCOBAR' LOL
I finished this book in one sitting, and let me say this: it was great and enjoyable! :D First, the premise is simple, but interesting. And of course, well-executed with all the descriptive phrases the author used. Humorous, also, hehe! And the use of first-person POV here is perfect, absolutely immersive for this type of story. I like it! :D The thing is tho, I personally think the use of "..." punctuation is a bit excessive. It's nice in a few places to set up the mood, but I think it could be less. Keep in mind it's just a personal preference tho, so I'll still give a full star review! <3