Tales of the  Rebirth  Apocalypse Emperor  (First draft)

Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor (First draft)

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Author: AmateurAuthor
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After living in the Gondola universe for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the claw of Lucifer, one of the emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his homeworld, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began…



Note: This book is the first draft of my first novel that I plan to write. The purpose is to get quick feedback from fellow writers and readers on how the story should develop. If you find the short draft version interesting to you, please find the full version of the novel under the name of "Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emporer".

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AmateurAuthor
AmateurAuthor

I shamelessly give a review to myself. :) I plan to divide the story into two main stages. 1) Apocalypse in MC original world. 2) Calamity in Gondola dimension. Synopsis: After living on Gondola for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his hometown, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began. Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :) Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible. Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story. Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story. World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.

4 years ago
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Madyan_wani
Madyan_wani

The work speaks of its efforts. You really did great. I love synopsis and plot. The characters and the backgroung are really hooking me. Hope it would be a mass hit in the future

4 years ago
2
Roze
Roze

It is a really wonderful novel, I hope that it would be updated more often. I'm already waiting for further developments in the story. 😁💯💯💯

4 years ago
1
scifiistheway
scifiistheway

i really like it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4 years ago
1
THEGUYFROMVILLAGE
THEGUYFROMVILLAGE

I rarely rea apocalypse genre but i had to review so i gave it a try. Not bad so far. Good storyline and the characters are well written. But i feel something missing here.

4 years ago
1
mozza_mello
mozza_mello

BRUH THIS IS GREAT :'D Well, first, the writing itself is great, and I really love how the author portrays things. It felt like I could visualize it :D AND THENNN THE PLOT IS SO GOOD LIKEE I FELT SO EMOTIONAL READING IT :'D Man I love the characters and the sadness :') Great work, author! Thank you for this! <3

4 years ago
1
AoiShana8
AoiShana8

I rarely read apoclypse and scifi story but this one is pretty good! The imagination, the world, the systems, all of them are very creative, interesting, and amazing! Highly recommended 💕💕 I can't wait for the next chapter 😁

4 years ago
1
ILLYAchan
ILLYAchan

This is a good story. I didn't often read novels about apocalypse but this one is interesting and so is the main character and how will he save his planet. It only needs proofreading in some chapters then it will turn to a more improved version of the story. This is still new and I think the author will still improve with this one. Good luck author!

4 years ago
1
_AiRen_
_AiRen_

wow this piece of work is truly so intriguing! This novel just had me kept reading but I needed to review it (◠‿◕) so here goes- A intricately tailored plotline with enticing concept, well designed characters consisting individual personalities, plot thickens with every chapters and occasionally leaves the readers wondering whats next?, the novel has mystery, humour, action, adventure, thrill,fun and furthermore the instances of an apocalypse are described well keeping the readers attention hooked!

4 years ago
1
Nokatozuki
Nokatozuki

aw, my favorite genre but why there is BL, 4 is my highest skor for the apocalypse and game element so it skor don't drop by much, but sorry i'm not gonna look into it good luck with your novel tough

4 years ago
1
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02

Hmm. The first chapter has an intriguing and good start. World Background, Great! Though there are literally lots of world here but the author greatly explain each. Characters is well around and I knew they would develop more. Overall this is already a great read. I'll look forward for more updates! Great work author!

4 years ago
1
Laury_bernny
Laury_bernny

This is a beautiful story and I loved reading it. The chapters are really moving, especially the bond in MC's family. It's so cute and adorable. The author has a great imagination and a nice story line. Really waiting for more chapters to be updated.

4 years ago
1
StarReading
StarReading

I think most of us have read enough apocalypse and revenge novels already but this novel is simply mind-blowing! In my opinion, this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. This story has a lot more potential and positive content. I'm glad that I found this. I think I definitely stumbled upon a rare gem here. Not only we have romance during the apocalyptic world, but there are also game abilities and kingdom building involved! Yes! You didn't read it wrong. They are all in this novel! There were also some scenes that I cried a lot and there were some scenes that I felt really happy. Most reborn novels have just only narrated the MC's past life experiences but here it was portrayed beautifully through the MC's perspective. I even got emotional at some points when I read it.  I highly recommend this novel. It is so worth it !!! The only thing that I wish the author to fix is to release a longer chapter and more frequent.  The author, please keep writing this book!

4 years ago
1
LamaLamu
LamaLamu

Oh my god! This book is simply awesome. What an unexpected lovely story inside an apocalypse novel. I was glad that I've found this novel! I highly recommend this novel to everyone who likes rebirth, apocalypse, mystery, and romance. I know it doesn't sound like it should come together but it does! Though a synopsis isn't that good but gives it a try for the first five chapters, then after that, I guarantee this will be one of your favorites!

4 years ago
1
Mystic_Dragon_
Mystic_Dragon_

OH I absolutely love the plot and the synopsis is good too . It would be great if the story had constant updates !!!! But , anyway All the best !!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

4 years ago
1