HAPPY EVER AFTER
(On HIATUS)
"Via, If there is no story where everyone could get a happily ever after, will you be able to make one?"
I remember Zash words as I look at the sky that is dye in red as blood and the moon that turns completely black.
[Beginners First Quest: Defeat the incoming monsters.
Failure: Death]
A screen pops out in front of me. I can't believe it, this really happening. The novel I read 'Journey of End' is happening in front of me.
Thus that day a fairytale with lots of twists and madness begins.
(P.S: This story is influenced by 'omniscient reader view, solo leveling and many more other system stories that I read, all the similarities are credited to the respective authors. I will work hard to make sure not to converge them much..)
Happy Reading :)
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Words per chapter 1200-2500 words
Updates every week.
Disclaimer: The image from the cover is not mine. I look for the owner but I could not find him/her. But the images fully belong and are credited to him/her. And if you are the owner and want it down, please email me at aviivasanara@gmail.com.
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Other Notes:
1. This story will focus more on action and adventure.
2. If you're looking for romance don't expect much anything here.
3. English is not my first language, so you may some grammar errors. If you corrected it, I would be grateful. I still come back to check chapters and reedit. But yeah, there is so much for one person to do at the same time. Though, I will do my best to improve this story.
Definitely has Omniscient Reader vibes about it, and a really great premise of novels come to life and monster fighting. One of my favorite webnovel tropes, so I am definitey on board for more. Only complaint is some lack of clarity around POV, but it is a really fun read regardless.
Really an enjoyable read! just my type 😬 About the novel- A well crafted plot line with a spicy concept, mild sprinkles of humouric condiments, delectablely tasty sequence of events paired with freshly grated narratives, finely minced characters combined with palatable personalities and not to forget the appetizing flavours of comdey, mystery, action, system and dainty world building! so yummy 🤤! Good job chef-author!
Well then, I don't usually read system stories since most of them tend to be, in all honesty, the same thing all the time in every story that uses this, and sometimes the system used is well...not good or it's not used that well by the characters. But that is not the case with this story right here, where the system is used pretty well and makes sense, which is good and in my opinion this is how most of the system novels should be. But let's start with the review proper, first off the world, it's pretty good and suck you right in with everything that happens and makes you want more. As for the characters, they are all pretty good and as of now pretty well written I have no complaints with any of them. Now the writing, it's pretty good there's a few grammatical errors here and there but I won't shame the author as we all make mistakes and it's not something unfixable All in all, pretty good story and I will be coming back for more P.S: if this sounds to vague it's in purpose since I want everyone that reads this review to read the story
I really enjoyed reading this novel❤️❤️❤️ so cool. The twist of the story is very interesting 💕[img=recommend] I think the author of this novel is well-inspired and has fond of imagination.. looking forward for more novels 🥰
I like how the story goes with the system. The precise items, weapons, and skills are described neatly. It's like being in an RPG game where fantasy and reality blend perfectly. I want to know more about Zash, and the characters, hope you give us more chaps!
.................. ❤❤❤ 😍😍😍 Beautiful story I love how the author did the story; it really is good and stunning... The synopsis already shows the beauty of the story what more in the chapters... and it's inspired by omniscient reader's viewpoint too! so another reason to read it! I love it ❤❤❤ I will add this to my reading list~~
Interesting Story. The characters are well around. Its only starting so there could be more home for improvements. This story has a potential so keep it up author.
Nice story, I like where the event and arc go. The writing is also beautiful. This is a great novel. I can't wait to see where the story goes next[img=recommend]
A story within the story of a story. Though what I said is confusing, the author does her best to narrate the story in a comedic interesting manner. I had laughs while reading it. The story unfolds with a good pace as details only come when necessary. With fairy tale like quests, the novel seems to promise a great plot. Good work, author!
I really enjoyed this novel, from the first chapter it draws you into their world and wonderfully showcases the MC's character. Gave me a lot of isekai manga/transmigration vibes but a solid read! Def recommend!
I love how it began. So many thrilling instances from the first chapter onwards. Genie, earthquake, meteorites... Interesting. The background of the story is very well built. I have added this to my library. keep it up, author!
so cool. inlove with the story. the longer i got to read the chapters the deeper I fell inlove with the story.. I love the twist 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Good job!
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Writing quality 3: It's simple and does the job. There some grammar issues tho. Try using ProWritingaid. It might be useful to improve the writing quality. Stability of updates 4: Since you do update frequently but not every 1 or 2 days. Story Development 5: It is a bit fast but I like to get into the action sooner rather than later. So 5. Character Design 4: I getting into her head more often would help. World Background 5: There is a lot to discover. Keep up the good work.