BETTER

No one said a word for the ride back . What was there to say though? They all had thousands of questions to ask but no one uttered a word . They wanted to know who he had come to see but it was not in their place to ask those questions. 

Ella wondered why Harry had been so quick to judge her. She felt sorry for him but she knew her words of comfort were not going to do the trick. Her mind was occupied elsewhere . She missed her sister even more and wondered what she would have thought about everything that had happened. She had always been her mum's favourite and her dad's . It was always hard in the day that their father had died and nothing could call her down.