The quality of the text is not good (typos present, bad construction of sentences). Furthermore, the story brings too close of the resemblence to other story with the SAME title... The Author claims in comments it was inspired on that book but even if so, I dont find real novelty in the story. Perhaps after improving the language, the story mighy not be so bad...
The quality of the text is not good (typos present, bad construction of sentences). Furthermore, the story brings too close of the resemblence to other story with the SAME title... The Author claims in comments it was inspired on that book but even if so, I dont find real novelty in the story. Perhaps after improving the language, the story mighy not be so bad...