has potential as a manipulative protagonist and among other genres.
- but needs an editor to improve it.
- It would be better to put each name and conversation separately, since it gets confusing when it is mixed and you don't know who is speaking, and you use the points and separations, put quotes, among other things.
4 years ago
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KYLE_BROWNE
love it man but I was hoping for the guy to die and get re-canaded in magic world 🌎 still love "good show" parts in the novel hope u keep going
has potential as a manipulative protagonist and among other genres. - but needs an editor to improve it. - It would be better to put each name and conversation separately, since it gets confusing when it is mixed and you don't know who is speaking, and you use the points and separations, put quotes, among other things.
love it man but I was hoping for the guy to die and get re-canaded in magic world 🌎 still love "good show" parts in the novel hope u keep going