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in my profile and thanks a lot and this is non prof
You have the strongest sword in the world, and the unparalleled power is at your fingertips!
Just ask, besides your own heart, what else is qualified to be your enemy in this world?
Born at the end of the Second Ninja War, Uchiha is a powerful man to fight the world!
Translation trash ......... ................................................................................................................
Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.
Terrible translation Inconsistencies Wrong terminology That's within les than half of first chapter Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
This was amazing to read and is a very interesting spin on the naruto series, that being said the translation is abhorrent and is pretty much unreadable, its a massive shame
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The translation is horrible,the naming of the powers are just as bad overall it is a bad of not horrendous story and a failure as an author. Good luck boy ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️ ciao.
pretty good story but MTL is bad even for a MTL . ,........ ............ .....................
Broken translation, messy language, messy character names, not really recommended......................!!!
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You need to fix the then names for things it makes it completely impossible to read and this probably could have been a good story if not for this
Great stuff. What I can say 5 STAR FOR EFFORT AND ALL BOOK STORY. GOOD STUFF READ PLEASE FULL SUPPORT MAKE MORE AND MORE BOOK LIKE THIS.. HI AUTHOR BEST OF LUCK
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