Naruto Dimensional System

Naruto Dimensional System

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Author: DarkSouls
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You have the strongest sword in the world, and the unparalleled power is at your fingertips!



Just ask, besides your own heart, what else is qualified to be your enemy in this world?



Born at the end of the Second Ninja War, Uchiha is a powerful man to fight the world!

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SadnessEnsues
SadnessEnsues

Translation trash ......... ................................................................................................................

3 years ago
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Cheerchinchin
Cheerchinchin

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4 years ago
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Duke_Night_Hawk
Duke_Night_Hawk

Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.

3 years ago
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demise134
demise134

4 years ago
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Walid_Djaafer
Walid_Djaafer

This was amazing to read and is a very interesting spin on the naruto series, that being said the translation is abhorrent and is pretty much unreadable, its a massive shame

3 years ago
5
Brian70707
Brian70707

Terrible translation Inconsistencies Wrong terminology That's within les than half of first chapter Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

3 years ago
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MAYANK_KUMAR_4300
MAYANK_KUMAR_4300

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2 years ago
2
akame_ga_kil
akame_ga_kil

The translation is horrible,the naming of the powers are just as bad overall it is a bad of not horrendous story and a failure as an author. Good luck boy ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️ ciao.

3 years ago
2
Killua_8376
Killua_8376

pretty good story but MTL is bad even for a MTL . ,........ ............ .....................

3 years ago
2
MarkinBitchs
MarkinBitchs

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3 years ago
1
Cheerchinchin
Cheerchinchin

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4 years ago
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Hisyam_Imanuddin
Hisyam_Imanuddin

Broken translation, messy language, messy character names, not really recommended......................!!!

3 months ago
0
Melon_daomaster_9
Melon_daomaster_9

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

4 months ago
0
DaoistiNwWmC
DaoistiNwWmC

You need to fix the then names for things it makes it completely impossible to read and this probably could have been a good story if not for this

9 months ago
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SWORDAUTHOR
SWORDAUTHOR

Great stuff. What I can say 5 STAR FOR EFFORT AND ALL BOOK STORY. GOOD STUFF READ PLEASE FULL SUPPORT MAKE MORE AND MORE BOOK LIKE THIS.. HI AUTHOR BEST OF LUCK

3 years ago
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