My love Is my cure
Author: MYSTERIOUSPEN_1424
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this is a love story between a couple from two different countries and a revenge of a boy who loses his mother in a case involving his uncle.
Well, this will not be like normal novel, it's more likely a story telling..( I mean it's return in that way)
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I am writing a review for the first time and I am writing this because I really really like this story... and now I'm very eager to know who will be the real culprit 🥺 I can't wait for another day for this story 😭 please update soon author[img=update]
Needs moderation, correction grammatically for formatting-sake! but apart from that the plot is soooo intriguing, the names are confusing to me because Im not too familiar hehe but its a kicking plot! i cant wait to find out the mastermind swirling stuff up for the mc! keep it upppp!!!
I am here to support you author .I love this story author . This story is very nice and awesome . keep updating author don't make me wait for so long .
liked the story author hope to see more updates 😊 if you are going to read this just read it I'm sure that you will like this story 😊 great story ☺️
A lot of editing is needed in the following: a) grammar - more work is suggested in punctuation, capitalisation and use of tenses. b) character introduction - a little more description of character is suggested viz, physical features, thoughts etc. c) background - both world and characters - it is very difficult to know where the story is happening. Vague description of a house as huge doesn't work much for the reader as it is very difficult to imagine the kind of house the author is trying to describe. I suggest more research on the background. The plot looks good but the story sounds like a rough draft rather than a fair copy. Having said that, I feel the story could be a lot better and gripping if it is edited properly. All the best for the author.